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Really like this chapter, and just want more...and more please!!!!

I love this. I hope you continue it

I would love to read more of this story!

Yay, people who do not have a profile on AFF can finally leave a comment here! I'm totally intrigued by the first chapter! francesco seems pretty mob-ish and I loooove characters like this! :D PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I cannot wait for more!

I wasn't able to review this story before but was just re-reading some stories I am following and now I can! I love stories like this and hope you continue writing it. I hope that Francesco doesn't shoot Nate! Update soon!

Awesome start of story!!!

Hi, welcome to AFF and I am very honored to be your first reviewer! I love mafia stories featuring sexy hot tempered mob bosses and their innocent young boys. I have read some very good ones too. I do think you need a Beta so suggest you check out the forum section for one. I enjoyed reading the first chapter and already have fallen in love with Nate but not sure yet about Francesco, LOL, but am sure that will change. FYI, I noticed only readers who are members can leave reviews for your story and thought I would mention you might want to change it and allow for anonymous reviewers too for those who don't have accounts here. Otherwise, the way you have it setup now is to allow signed-in reviews which is for members only and non-members can't leave you any.

Love love this story

Great start! Looking forward to reading more and seeing how this relationship plays out.