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for A Life not Spent with You

by RinoaBelieveNever

schedule November 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What happened to Ivan's boss's family was so sad. Ivan has to keep such a close eye on Damien. Even if he sounds cheery, he might be faking it. It's so hard to tell. He should really have some therapy also. He needs to rid himself of the guilt and the feeling that it was all his fault.

Excellent two chapters! Oh, I noticed in this chapter also in some paragraphs more than one person was speaking.

I look forward to the next update! :)
person Anon
schedule November 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So dark, so angsty, so good.....love that you are updating, thanks.
person Anon
schedule November 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Overjoyed to see an update, it was good.....
schedule October 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really find myself caring about Dami and Ivan. I hope things get better and they catch the bad guy. Dami needs a good trauma therapist right away. Poor sweety. I look forward to reading more.
person Ariana
schedule October 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The love between Ivan and Damien is wonderful to read, hopefully the healing can slowly but surely begin for them both.a
person jusme
schedule September 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So glad for this update, such a sad but beautiful story.
person E.J
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love your writing, the emotions and turmoil really come through. I totally cried!
person ericaM
schedule August 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wow an update....thanks, been waiting for it.
person Michelle
schedule July 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That second chapter brought tears to my eyes. You are an amazing writer. You're handling the perspective beautifully. :)
schedule July 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you really have the emotions of both the victim and the victim's loved one down pat. The uncertainty, the guilt, the what-ifs on both their parts. It was hard to read this. They are both suffering so much, of course Damien more - he was the one who was attacked, after all.

It's good Dr. M. explained what some of the side effects might be. I hope that Ivan takes Damien to see a therapist. That will definitely help.