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by wynja

schedule July 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Wynja! I can't believe you left the chapter like that! They didn't even get to talk!

I bet Jake was talking to, I don't know, a brother? A sister? Or maybe he has a kid? I'm sure it wasn't another guy though. I hope at least it wasn't another guy.

I feel really badly for Mark's mom. It's one thing to lose your sight as a small child, but as a middle-aged person, it's so much harder, I imagine. She is very brave though. And she is right, as well as Lance of course, that Lance has been helping Mark their whole lives but Mark never saw it that way, that's just the way it was, so when someone else comes along to "help" he gets insulted.

Oh, I was curious: how does Mark cross the street? How does he know when the light changes and he can cross?

Oh, and the whole "marry me" was hysterical! Lance is going to find a place that will turn him gay so he can marry Mark. lol

And Mark's dad, omg, I almost fell out of my chair! Holy shit! "At least they'll be screwing involved." (or something like that) Shit that was hysterical! :)

Damn, ok, the countdown starts: six more days...you really have to update more than once a week, Wynja! The waiting is killing me....lol.
person wolfluv
schedule July 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WELL isn't this just a HOT MESS!!!!! I can't wait to see if Jake went to see his family of some sort or if he really went to see an old flame!!! That is quite the cliffy!!!! read ya laters.... I AM TOTALLY LOVING THING STORY!
person reader1962
schedule July 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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person RitsuO3O
schedule July 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
THE PHONE CALL WAS A MISUNDERSTANDING!!! Jake wouldn't do something like that(muahaha or would he?) There there Mark...
I <3 this story.
This story has enraptured me!
person miles
schedule July 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jake ! I'm sure the all situation is not what it seems...
I say : come back Jake ! :))
Thanks for the update
person Penny
schedule July 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is perfect! Love Lance so much, a good friend and funny! The dialogue between him and Mark is so good at times I'm laughing out loud, keep up the good work. Oh this may just be an 'office romance' story with not much happening but it's your writing talent that makes it come to life, that makes it so much more and your characters are very endearing.
person Cham
schedule July 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have enjoyed this story so much I started reading you work on FF.net, and let me tell you, I love those stories as well. I like the humor you are able to bleed into the stories while still being able to keep the characters from completely cliched moments most of the time lol. Thank you for your story.
person Pagan
schedule July 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You were wrong about one thing...this IS an amazing story! I've loved every word of it so far.
person waterwolf
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhh the suspense.
person Rosei
schedule July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love the banter!
Lots of fun!

Thank you!