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for Now See Here!

by wynja

person wolfluv
schedule July 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
first thought after reading the end was "EVIL BITCH" only because of the cliffy! But yeah that was a great page! I'll tune in next week to the bat channel to read what happens next! read ya laters!
person Franz
schedule July 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please let Jake come in. 2 chapters without Jake and Mark is too much. They should talk to each other.
person E.J.
schedule July 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love this. Lance is very funny and the dialogue is so perfect between them!!!! Cant wait to see jake and pooch work things out.
person miles
schedule July 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Forgive him, Jake !! You know you want it ! :))
Guess the parents will meet the boyfriend soon... Great chapter. Funny one. Thanks.
person AfterTheIceMelts
schedule July 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I never review on AFF, but you know what? You're worth it. This is just another story that I'm going to wait for from you. I shall sit here, biting my nails for the next chapter because OHMYGODJAKEISTHEREANDMARK'SPARENTSARECOMINGOVERANDTHINGSAREGONNABEFUCKEDUPORREALLYFUNNY.

Can't wait until next Saturday! :D
person Pagan
schedule July 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow. We have to wait a whole week to see if Jake is smooth enough to make up with Mark before Mark's parents show up!?! I will just go cry quietly in a corner now...

Seriously, I love this story, and I love these characters. I hope you do more stories in this universe, I like it here. And I wanted to mention that your English is EXCELLENT.
person Angel
schedule July 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think Mark should bring up the other guy to Jake. Jeep up the good work! :D
schedule July 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is a really good story. I now have something to look forward to on Saturdays... Ignore how pitiful that makes my life sound. :/ Can't wait to see what happens next.

Kitkat
person lo
schedule July 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. I like the characters you have created and the pacing is great. I can't wait to read more!
person cheesekun
schedule July 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Lance is adorable, as always ;) Hope the boys make up soon!