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I truly do love this story! read ya laters!

Mark and Jake are so cute together!!! Like UGHHH I get butterflies in my stomach just reading this, SO FREAKING CUTE!!! This is a magnificent story! Thank you!

Hey, this is going to seem like something that is totally off topic and useless in a review, but I just had to mention it after reading chapter 7 when they are talking about creating a game in which you have to rely on hearing and not visuals. There is a game like that that actually exists. I don't know what it's called, sorry! But I know it's an iphone game because my friend let me try it out because it freaked her out! XD Basically you have to play with a set of earphones, and the screen only has a little wheel and 2 shoe prints. The idea is that you are in a dark room and you have to find a music note in the room by following the source of the note. You press the shoe prints to move forwards and the wheel to orient yourself. Literally the only thing out can do is use your ears to guide you to the note! Sounds a little boring but as the game goes on, enemies are introduced. At first they are stationary, and as you walk towards them, you can hear them breathe. Later, you get some that pace as well. It's a REALLY cool and fun game, but kinda freaky as well! It uses the same technology to record sound as "The Virtual Haircut", I believe. Just thought you might find that interesting! Loving the story as well, of course!:)

That whole scene when Mark's folks walked in on him and Jake making out was hysterical! The parents joking that Jake isn't a girl and Mark's father only cares that he graduated from MIT. lol They really are terrific parents! And Jake just goes with the flow - he actually fit right in there.

It was such a funny chapter. I'm hoping Lance will be at the dinner also so the next chapter will be mind-blowing hysterics! :) lol

Lance and Mark's folks must spend their whole time together cracking jokes. lol =)

I am in love with this story<3 It was so funny when O'Conner was flirting with Lance, had me smiling the whole time. I await the next chapter with love<3


I love Mark.

Another great chapter. I like how your characters interact with each other and they are all very interesting. Great job!

Haha I do always love when Lance has a part but daymn!This time it was hilarious!!!I see a potential relationship between Lance and Andy here!But got to admit,the idea of Mark and Lance is really starting to sound appealing!Wish if anything were to happen to Lance's sexuality,it would start with Mark.Fingers crossed!

I knew Jake was gonna show up!!!Now we get to see the awkward 'Meeting With Parents'!!!
Which normally would end in either of these four ways: a)Everything will go well and the father will like the boyfriend and they will spend the rest of the night talking about 'golf'.
b)Everything will go down the drain and it'll be a disaster.The new decorating of The Sanders' living room would be Jake's head.That's,of course,if the father didn't have a gun licence.Otherwise they will use Jake as the new stuffed decoration or the new skin rug.
c)It will turn out Jake and Mrs. Sanders did it a long time ago and things will become awkward.(additionaly Mark can turn out to be Jake's son)
d)Turns out Jake is Mrs. Sanders' long lost brother and/or father and again,things will become awkward.

"The batcomputer is none too frisky today, Batman." Holy smokes - sorry, I couldn't resist! :)

Now Mark's folks will meet Jake. This will be very intersting. lol

Wynja, you really crack me up! The whole lunch scene with Mark, Lance and Andrew was priceless! Lance is so funny and him and Andrew just feed off of one another. Lance is such an awesome character; he is so understanding and just so cool with everything.

Now, the countdown till Saturday...dum de dum dum...

Holy shit, Wynja! Did you read Fire_Demon's review? Holy hell that's funny! Damn, she's as funny as Lance...

Laughed so much during this chapter (the banter between Lance and pony-tail was hilarious!;)) Love that Jake is persistent and hope that Mark and Jake get together soon!