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for Now See Here!

by wynja

person catiemon
schedule August 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really love this story! This made me laugh, smile, giggle... a lot! ^_^

Looking forward for more! :)
person Naga-Lord
schedule August 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Den har storyn har verkligen fått mig att skratta. Vilket kul sätt att ge det hela en ny vinkel. :) Jättebra skrivet!
person Sarkukka
schedule August 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story! Saturdays are becoming my favorites because of it. Mark's such a sweety, and I absolutely want his parents. They're so amazing!
Can't hardly wait for the next chapter, cause hopefully there's a lot self-conscious, steaming hot man-sex. =D
Thank you so much for a wonderful work! I hope you have something new cooking already for us.
person Rachel
schedule August 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love mark's parents...lol;-)thanks for the update:D
schedule August 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes,well...Phone numbers are such a trivial things nowadays...Who needs them when you have carrier pigeons or you can just write down your message and put it in a bottle and throw it in the sea,anyway?

What????Jake was a MAN all this time???And furthermore,Mark CAN'T get pregnant???B-but...I...I thought that...*starts bawling*I feel so...so...cheated!!!Why didn't you say so sooner?I-I don't feel safe anymore...I bet now you're gonna tell me there's no money at the end of the rainbow and tooth fairy doesn't exist and it was my mother all along!Why don't you go along and tell me you can't actually run into platform 9-3/4 in King's Cross station and end up next to Hogwarts Express!???

Owww...And here I was looking forward to Mark getting laid...And I was thinking the exact same thing as Jake when he got out of the shower!!!With the exception that I expected him to actually come out naked and ready to flaunt his body only to realize Mark can't see!

Ah Jake is gonna go to Marks's parents' house!'Awkward-Childhood-Photo-Watching' ensues!

Can't wait for more~
person cheesekun
schedule August 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hehe;) I was just waiting for Mark's parents to walk in... They're so much like Lance! Loved the make up scene!
person miles
schedule August 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
His mother is priceless ! Made me laugh ! :)
Like her, I hope they're going to get married...
person sidana
schedule August 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wow!!this story is really cool!!!kepp up the good work!!!
person Pagan
schedule August 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another great chapter! I stayed up past 2am because I knew you posted early and I wanted to read it right away. (I waited until I had some sleep before I reviewed, though.) Looking forward to next week.
person dut
schedule August 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So sweet! Gosh can't wait for more smex.. without sight, Mark will feel even more intense! Im a pervy tat way sorry haha.. Love his parents. They are so cute and cool.