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by wynja

schedule August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
FOUR THOUSAND DOLLARS FOR A SUIT???????????? I'm still picking my mouth off the floor after reading that one! lol

Terrific chapter, Wynja! :) I will certainly miss these guys. I was sorry to read so little of Lance in this chapter. I'm definitely interested in reading a sequel of sorts with Lance and O'Connor, or Lance and just about anyone. Well, not Mark of course and Jake...but I love Lance and would love to read anything with him in it. Just don't turn him into a vampire or a mpreg guy or anything. lol

You're a terrific writer, Wynja and I can't wait to read more from you. :) Oh, I think you have to put a "Complete" down in the summary now.
person lo
schedule August 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another sweet chapter, nice. Your characters make me grin and I can't wait to see more.
person daqueenbee
schedule August 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying your story. I do love first time mm stories. You are found a great job.
schedule August 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, loved it, loved it!

I couldn't believe Lance fell for Andrew's baiting! lol Wonder why he doesn't want to talk about it again? lol

But the banter between Andrew and Lance and their flirting was so funny!

I gotta thank you, Wynja, my dog died at 4:30 this morning, and all I have been doing all day is crying. I turned on the computer just to see if you updated since it was Saturday. I really needed a good laugh and to forget about my problems for a bit. so thank you - you made this sad girl laugh. I knew I could count on you. =)
person RitsuO3O
schedule August 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loving this! Chapter 9 was great. Lance is so funny, Ohohoho I know he enjoyed that kiss, Oh Lance you! I pretty much smiled the whole chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person cheesekun
schedule August 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter ;), but a bit sad to see it end.
person miles
schedule August 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
lol ! Guess he's going to do some other sport !! :P
Great chapter, very funny !
Lance kissed O'connor ?! We're in the fourth dimension ! :)
person reader1962
schedule August 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
: )
person Pagan
schedule August 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for another wonderful update! Kind of sad to see that the story is coming to and end...the only good thing about it is that will give you a chance to write a new story. Hint, hint. I've really loved this story and can't wait to see how it ends.
person lo
schedule August 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice job, I really enjoyed the interaction with his parents.