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August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story. Please do a spin off of Lance/O'conner I really want to see how that plays out. Once again love the story and can't wait to see what else you have planned.
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August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The ending was really rushed, it was obvious that they weren't in love yet but you just sorta wanted the story to end but before that it was a decent story, it felt like it had a bit more plot and loose ends to tie up before it was finished.
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August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story... i didn't want it to end. Please do an O'Connor/Lance story, Those two are hilarious and awesome together.
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August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please do a spin off. I want to know if lance got it on with the red head flirt o'conner...pleeeeeease do a spin off?! I really enjoyed the story and I'm sad to see it end but I loved it!
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August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sad to see it end, I loved every chapter. Please do the spin off I would love to see if O'Connor can get Lance.
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August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That spinoff sounds excellent. Yes, please.
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August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. Looking forward to reading more from you!
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August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ch 9: for some reason ch 9 seemed kind of disjointed. i feel like i could've skipped the whole chapter and not miss anything important
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August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It seemed rushed like you just wanted to end it and there could have been more closure. Oh, you might want to put up a tag that story is complete too so as not to confused anyone.
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August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
what name do u write under at wattpad and Fiction Press? I thought you said you only wrote at FF so what's up?