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by wynja

person Sarkukka
schedule August 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this story! Those Saturday updates really lighted my day. I would like to read a one-shot about their switching and definitely I would like to read a story about Lance and his gay suitor. Please! It's utterly the best when those straight boys turn to gay. Love it! <3
Thanks for the great story!
schedule August 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, I'm glad to have read it! I loved all the characters, and have a soft spot for Lance!

AFF could do with some more Merperson stories ;) Hope to see you around more often!
schedule August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Do you know I've been waiting since 12 A.M. FRIDAY??????? And by the time I went to bed at 3 A.M. you still hadn't posted the update. All day I've been checking for it and now it's 1:01 A.M. and YOU POSTED!!!! Of course you could have slid by with only seconds to spare b/c I haven't checked AFF in the last hour. lol But I'm so excited you posted!!!! :) You always know how to make my Saturdays. And last Saturday was a sad, sad day, so thank you so much for making me laugh.

Ok, now on to reading...
person makosira
schedule August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww, it's over? D: Oh well, I thoroughly enjoyed it~ Was one of the stories I looked forward to an update from. Though I'm noticing a lot of fics I've been looking forward to have been ending or getting close to ending recently.

And I'd DEFINITELY like to see some Lance/O'Connor spin-off stuff. I loved their back and forth "flirting" and whatnot, and I'd definitely like to know more about that kiss, seeing as all we got from Lance was that it was "different". :P
person cheesekun
schedule August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's over! But I loved every moment of it! The sex scene was hot;D Please do write a spin off on Lance ('cause I loved him and his dirty mouth to bits! :))I'll definitely keep checking here regularly to see what else you publish in the future:D Love mpregs too. Cheers!
person Klen K
schedule August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It was a lovely story to read. Thank you for sharing it with us.

You got me interested in the idea with the mermen. Now I'd love to see that :)
person RitsuO3O
schedule August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
THIS WAS LOVELY!!! Although I'm sad it ended. You really should do a spin-off about Lance/O'Conner *wiggles eyebrows*. And a story about mer-people would be legitimately AWESOME!!! I really enjoyed this story, THANK YOU!
person miles
schedule August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The end already ?! That was hot ! And very romantic ! :))
Thank you for sharing this story with the AFF's readers...
I would like a little spin off with Lance... And I love mpreg !
Until then... :))
person punksock
schedule August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this was great. love how they communicated and interacted. would have liked a more fleshed out lemon scene.would love a follow up with lance and oconnor:D
schedule August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*the sound of hundreds of people clapping*
*a graceful figure climbs the stairs,trips on one but continues as if nothing happened**the crowd silences*
-Thank you.Thank you.*waving at the audience*.Firstly,I feel the need to thank The Fabulous Wynja for bestowing this Amazing Story upon us humble readers.For changing our opinions on water coolers and *golf* forever.For showing us that you can be gay and still not know the difference between Catalina blue and Navy Blue or the very,*very* important fact that Cornell Red,Crimson glory and Dark Red are three very,*very* different worlds.For letting us in on the knowledge that your black cat watching you have sex is a major turn on.Even if said cat decides cat-humping is a lot more interesting and sleeps halfway through it and for showing us that if you wear your gay pride pendant at work,there's a hundred percent chance that you'd get laid by a straight,funny and adorable blond.So thank you,thank you,THANK YOU!

I don't know what you're worried about.I'm sure everyone wants to read an O'Conner/Berg story!And I would absolutely love an Mpreg story!I mean you can write an angst and drama filled secret love story between a flying toilet paper and a golf *sniff* player and I would gladly read it!I personally would read anything you wrote.Well,almost anything.If you wrote an M/F story,I would avoid you like the plague and then mourn losing such a fantastic author to the excruciatingly boring light side.
...Maybe build a memorial even...A giant shaft besides a water cooler with a plaque that read:"In loving memory of Wynja.The greatest office romance writer known to human kind who lost the battle between the light and the dark side.May the force still be with her..."

Okay now,for once,a constructive review.I love that you decided that you needed to put an end to stupid sex scene clichés that everyone (well except for the real gay men who write slash) are so keen on following.I'm a girl and get annoyed at their ignorance!I can't imagine how the dudes reading these must feel!I mean one finger doesn't cause 'unbearably sharp pain'!At most,it'll cause a slight discomfort.And I don't believe hitting the prostate once can cause 'white hot pleasure searing thorough body,make the vision go white and reach an orgasm'.I mean,it's a bundle of nerves!The first time it'll cause a lot more pressure than pleasure...It'll take a lot more than just one hit to reach an orgasm with prostate alone.But maybe I shouldn't talk about these since I kinda don't know what I'm talking about and I'm just being logical(well,as logical as I can get!!!!)In any case,thank you again!It was a refreshing change.

Thank you for (10) Days of Saturday!They have been wonderful!Our Saturdays are like everywhere else's Mondays!First day of the week,meaning work and school two giant pain in the ass!But they have been delightful these past 10 weeks!Thanks again! :)