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by wynja

person Katniss Everdeen
schedule June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I apologize but just left a review here for a different story!!!! It's early and I haven't had my morning coffee so that's my excuse and please forgive me. I am leaving another review for this story too.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi, it's me again, with review for the correct story this time, LOL. I am really getting a kick out of Lance, he really is so funny and a great friend to Mark too. I love their friendly bickering back and forth. I can't wait until Jacob and Mark share their first kiss. I hope you can update more often than every Saturday but if not will wait until then.
person Anon
schedule June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! This story is great
person dazedandconfused
schedule June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope the date Lance sets Mark up with is of course with Jake! I think Lance is sneaky enough to pull that off without his friend finding out until the last minute. I wish you could update more often (like daily) but will wait until Saturday for updates.
person Star
schedule June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!!!!..
person dut
schedule June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story! a character with blindness as handicap is not usual. Love the progress. can't wait for the next one!
person Jessie
schedule June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying reading this story and the dynamics of all the characters in it. I wish you would update sooner but guess I will have to wait along with everyone else for Saturday updates. ~~~ cries ~~~~
person Franz
schedule June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like how you write, how both slowly will be friends and then... Who knows !!!! Thanks for update and please continue this.
person rora
schedule June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
New Story!! I like where this is going. The humor is the best part of this story....I like hat Mark isn't all emo because of his diability. Lance is my favorite character right now....such a cool dude. For some reason in my head I give Mark an English accent even though he's from the east coast.....weird.
schedule June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Goddammit!!! I have a complaint!!! I have to wait a whole other WEEK to read the next chapter! I'm so addicted to this story. Which only goes to show you what a great writer you are. :)

I absolutely LOVE Lance! He is hysterical! His banter back and forth with Mark is just so amusing. They have such great senses of humor. It's amazing how Mark can easily joke about blind jokes or jabs. I'm also incredibly impressed with how he navigates the city. He knows exactly what buses he needs to take, he knows which direction he needs to walk, he figures out how to get around in the gym, etc. It just amazes me. I give him so much credit. And he's so good-natured about being blind and about everything. He's so pleasant. I can picture another person just bitching and complaining about his disability, but not Mark. He is really very inspiring.

Loved the double chocolate frapp - there goes all Mark's time in the gym. lol

I thought I was the only one who couldn't stand it when people smoke. It's totally true - they have no clue how horrid and disgusting they smell. I have a friend who smokes and every time we take my car I don't let her smoke before we get in it, b/c she may as well be smoking in the car. The smell follows her around for hours and hours. Shit, I feel like taking a shower just THINKING about it. Never mind wasting your time buying deodorant, you're wasting your time buying toothbrushes and toothpaste! lol

Terrific chapter, Wynja! :) Cannot wait until the next one.