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June 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A really good story up till now. I think you're doing a great job and just can't wait for the next chapter :) Keep up the good work!
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June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think I'd like this story as much as I do! It's very well written and I like the personalities of your characters. Pete the office dick makes me laugh. There is seriously one like him in EVERY job. Looking forward to your updates!
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June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story! Wonder if Peter has a (secret) crush on Mark, or if he's just a douch...?
Love the way you create a sense of what the world is like for Mark (why he prefers to use a tread mill, fear of getting lost, all the devices he'd use etc).
Looking forward to reading more!
Love the way you create a sense of what the world is like for Mark (why he prefers to use a tread mill, fear of getting lost, all the devices he'd use etc).
Looking forward to reading more!
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June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It looks like i have another story to look forward to :) im glad!
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June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
omg, I looooooove this story! aw, cannot get enough! please write MORE! :D
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June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter YAY. I am in love with this story. I love how you are taking the time to develop the characters. The interactions between Mark and Lance really make me laugh. Would love another chapter sooner than next Saturday, but will wait patiently (maybe not, might just have to read the first two chapter many times like I did the first chapter this week). But seriously love this story and your writing. Thank you for posting.
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June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like it very much how Jake seems to be more mellow around Mike when they're alone... how cute ;)
Your writing style is really nice by the way, it's awesome how lively everything is even though we -along with Mark- actually don't see anything...
Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
Your writing style is really nice by the way, it's awesome how lively everything is even though we -along with Mark- actually don't see anything...
Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
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June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you very much for such a nice start of new story! :)
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June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay, update ! Thank you !
Jake is in love I think ! :))
Keep the good work...
Jake is in love I think ! :))
Keep the good work...
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June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a great read this is and I don't know how I missed reading it the first time around but will be sure not to again. I would love to learn more about this Bittersweet and hope he's not dead but he must be if Jacob hasn't seen him since the attack. If it wasn't Bittersweet, who was the other victim and did Jacob know him? I think Arturo will turn out to be a very good friend of Jacob's and have a feeling he's a jokester. I like David and am glad he's not as bad as I thought he was going to be.