rate_review Reviews

I really really like this. It's very well written and definately cute. I think you may have reviewed some of my stuff, and I know I don't update very well at all.

I'm really looking forward to the next Chapter next Saturday. :D

Thanks for good story which isn't filled with tons of angst or really creepy stuff.

Hugs Aduial

I love this story, I think Mark is super funny!! I cant wait for the next chapter!

so cute <3 i love your writing style and the story <3 keep on going! dont let the evil fb games eat you ;D

Mark, Linda is a bitch I would have dated you, you are so charming and sweet. You being gay is no problem for me at all...oh so me being a girl would be a problem for you?...Ok :(. lol I love the story so far and cannot wait for each update, great job!!

That was adorable with Jake and Mark. Poor Mark though with being ditched. :( Some people aren't nice.

I love Lance! He tickles me pink XD This hits all my buttons, I really do love a good office romance *dreamy sigh* Thx for the early update, looking forward to seeing more! :D

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Wynja - put the controller down! Log out of fb and START WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL NEXT SATURDAY!!!!! Do you realize that is EIGHT FRIGGEN DAYS AWAY??????????????????

I need my Mark/Lance/Jake fix!!!

Damn, what a great chapter that was! Holy shit I was laughing so hard! "You're trying to open the wall." "Just checking if I needed to put out." Omg, Lance is a fucking riot! Actually, Mark's dad is pretty funny also. Mark's parents are smart - both science professors. One of my kids wants to major in neuroscience.

Lance is the absolute BEST FRIEND IN THE WORLD! He takes care of Mark so much. He doesn't get upset at Mark for the girls ditching them, he gets upset with the girls (and as he should), but I'm sure there are best friends out there who would sort of resent their friend b/c the date didn't go as planned. Lance is just wonderful. :)

Oh, I noticed almost halfway down, Sharon's name started out as Sharon, but then changed to Shannon.

Anyway...I am totally in love with this story, and yes there are PLENTY of stories out there where the author doesn't update for MONTHS AND MONTHS, never mind weeks, but wow, if you put your Sims away and log out of fb and open up a new word document, you'll be all set to continue this hella awesome story. :) Oh, and speaking of logging out of fb, how the hell do you do that now? They changed everything about it and have no clue how to log off. I just click on the X at the top of the page. lol

So...happy writing! =)

Pooch - hehe

this is lovely. looking forward to more.

This story is quite enjoyable...get off of Sims and write! hehehe