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for Now See Here!

by wynja

person Oo
schedule July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really really enjoying this.
person jaminyaoi51
schedule July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Now kiss! Loved it!
person miles
schedule July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Of course he had to be hit by a cougar !! lol !
I like how their relationship progress. Jake knows what he wants ! Yeah, it's great !
Until next week :))
schedule July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!I love this!I love Lance,I love Mark,I love Mark's Dad,hell,I even think I like Peter the Prick!!!! Mark is so adorable!!!I think you've done a splendid job capturing Mark's emotions,the insecurity he feels in public,his naivety,his sense of humor,how he wants people to see past his blind facade and accept him as just 'him',nothing more nothing less,...It's very well done.You deserve a real pat on the back.*nodding head wisely and stroking imaginary beard*

But I still don't trust Jacob.He has to earn it!

Wouldn't it be awesome if,in the end,Lance ended up with a dude and that said dude finally tamed him and made him settle down? :D
person Franz
schedule July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Jake and Mark are so cute together, I like how they are friends and then more..... Thank you for your Hard work !!!!!
person Klen K
schedule July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I started reading on a whim and was more than pleasantly surprised. I even got goosebumps a couple of times when Jake & Mark were a bit more intimate with each other. And I laughed out load at the parts with the heavy lifting. Just promise me there will be a happy ending and you have a fan for life in me :)
person wolfluv
schedule July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I FUCKING LOVE IT!!!!!!! read ya laters!!!
schedule June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I haven't reviewed a story in quite some time but this one really caught me attention. I'm really liking the build-up to self discovery for Mark, and seeing the world he has made for himself you can believe how his discovery of who he is has taken so long to come. I like good characterization and you write it well.
person wolfluv
schedule June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!! I am sooooo glad I'm not the only one who thinks things like "not dating someone with the same disablity and dating an able body person"... I'm in am wheelchair and have been since I was 22 I'm 42 now and GOD love my family but they just automatically assumed I was going to date other disabled people and tried pushing a few on me don't get me wrong I would but it's nice to know I'm not the only one... By the way I AM TOTALLY LOVING THIS STORY!!! read ya laters!
person cheesekun
schedule June 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Thanks for the chapter! I feel a little sorry for Jake. Can see you've put heaps of research into this fic (with the vision impairment aids etc).Can't wait to read more.;)