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July 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story! Naturally developing plot, strong, likable characters, regular updates...what's not to love? I'm looking forward to the rest of this story, and hope to see more stories from you.
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July 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! I'm very much looking forward to reading more :)
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July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
FUCK YEAH!!! Okay, I love the end of this chapter!!! Fucking love it. I don't even... I just... fuck, I can't words right now. I love this story so much.
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July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet n cute chapter. Jake is real smooth and daring to try n convince Mark to consider is sexuality. Cant wait!
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July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi, this is very good! Your writing is really easy to read, it flows and the conversations are natural. English may not be your first language but one could never guess! I'm enjoying the humour between Mark and Lance, best friends definitely the way they banter-love it! Jake, hitting on Mark so quickly, not sure but hey it happens. So as I said this is well written, funny and engaging. I'm hooked!
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July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Your work is amazing! Really love it, and the way Mark is so smart at it and doesn't let it bother him that he is blind. Everything about this story is wonderful. I thank you for creating this story and know that I am a big fan. Looking forward to next Saturday!!
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July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Aw! They make such a nice couple! I love them already! I really, really can't wait for more! :D:D Already looking forward to next saturday, haha!
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July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Talk about a cocktease! ;-)
Can't wait 'til next week!
Can't wait 'til next week!
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July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this storie. It is well written, well paced and the characters are good... The interaction between Mark and Jack is very fun, several lines mades me laught a lot!
Bye
M
Bye
M
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July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Jake is such a smooth talker ;)
Can't wait 'til next weekend!
Can't wait 'til next weekend!