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I can't wait for the next chapter. Jake really has some learning to do.

I've enjoyed the first chapter. :) Also, thank you for using the word "literally" correctly in your summary!

Oh man, Wynja, that was scary! I can't imagine how terrifying it would be to be caught up in a situation like the one in the movie theater, being trampled on, not knowing which direction you're supposed to go, and the person you were with is separated from you.

I do understand Mark's position - he doesn't want to rely on ANYONE. He doesn't want to feel helpless. He wants to be self-sufficient. It's just incredible the way he lives in his apartment. He keeps is clean. How he knows which cleaner to use for what is beyond me. Maybe he uses the same system as the milk and oj system. :) Of course if he bought the PLASTIC bottles of either, or both, it would be easier. lol Anyway...how does he know what shirt and tie go with what suit? Or shoes? Or belt? It's just amazing how he does the basic every day things.

Jake just doesn't understand that Mark wants to be independent, he needs to be independent. He doesn't want people feeling sorry for him and thinking he's helpless. Now Mark is going to think that Jake is with him just so he can "help" him get around and such. I hope he doesn't think that Jake is with him out of pity...

Of course Jake will walk to Mark's apartment. I hope Mark lets him in.

Terrific chapter, Wynja! :)

My normal weekly complaint still stands though: I HATE WAITING ALL WEEK FOR AN UPDATE!!!! lol :) This is one of my favorite stories on here, so it's hard to wait a whole SEVEN DAYS for an update! lol

Hi Wynja! I have been reading many of your stories on ff.net over these past couple of months and am absolutely in love with your style of writing. The only reason I never commented on your stories on ff.net was that I never created an account and am not crazy abouy trying to make one either. When I found out that you had started an original story I decided to come here on my account and read the story. I have not once been disappointed in any of the stories that you have written. When I started reading Now See Here! I was really shocked on how interested I am with the plot. I can honestly say that you are one of the few authors that I really do enjoy reading stories from. The plots for you stories are interesting, there are few to no mistakes in each chapter, and the characters are so much fun to read about. If your stories were to be published, they would be one of the many few that I would spend my money just to read. I can't wait to read more of your stories and am glad you are finally breaking free and writing your own original story. It takes a lot of courage and time to create and original story and will support you all the way. Thank you for writing such an incredible story!
-Kat :)

Oh no! My new favorite couple is unhappy! We need to fix this! Seriously, though, thank you for being so on top of your updates. I'm still loving this story, and look forward to reading more of it.

Awesome chapter! Totally sympathize with Mark, he's had one sh@#y day, and people can be so judgmental (even of the disabled). Hope Mark doesn't get lost... Jake is going to be pretty upset...
Love the way you write so well from the perspective of a blind person :D

Oh damn...That didn't went all that well...Jacob was a bit unreasonable.When there's a herd of rabid people pushing you around and you're panicking,there's really no time to think about taking out canes or calling for help,so I side with Mark on this.
And I think his anger is rather reasonable because people tend to get defensive when other people point out/pick on their weaknesses or their oddities or their differences from other 'normal' people...Jake himself got defensive and angry when he thought Mark was looking at his pendant.
Although I do hope he doesn't get lost or worse,kidnapped or something!*chewing nails off with worry*

Aaaah...Golfers *spitting the word out like something nasty*.The government should put them in zoos already ,those filthy Mudbloods!...Woops...no that was something else...

Have I ever mentioned I love Lance?Well,the truth is...I effing Love Lance!

Wish you'd update sooner.But I'm not pushing my luck.Had too many authors ditching the story half way,so I'm content as long as I know you'd update eventually...

Mark had a very bad day ! :(
But Jake is obstinate sooo he's going to make it better ! ^^
I hope !
Until next week...

Dammit, girl! You're such a tease! lol

I gotta say it again: Lance is so fucking funny!!! Omg, they'll ALL get raises! Omg, I almost fell out of my chair! :)

And Andrew O'Connor just wanted a quick roll in the hay, omg, too funny. Poor Mark! Being mauled by HIS FEMALE BOSS!!! And being propositioned by a programmer. Holy crap! ;)

So now Mark's a twink, lol!

Cannot wait for the next installment! :)

love love the story, is funny, more ah read Nexus from Mary Calmes is grate