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by wynja

schedule October 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I really enjoyed this story. The writing was well done. The characters were appealing and the dialogue flowed well. Nice job!  Xoxo Robin

person Rukia Isaioi
schedule June 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
U no, even tho this story is long finish, I keep coming back 2 reread it(this is like my 8th time doing so). If its not a dumb request: could u possibly write more blind man romance stories n the future??? Iadore ur flow & dinamic so well. Sadly I just couldn't get in2 Lance's story(only got 2 or 3 chaps n) & I believe that's partly the reason. So, pretty plz w sprinkles & a cherry on top???
Rukia
person Anon
schedule November 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was a pleasure to read. You handled MC's blindness very well, everything progressed logically, the characters were all lovely. I found myself smiling often and actually laughing a few times, so points for comedy and humor. For what it's worth, I didn't feel the ending was rushed. Thanks for sharing this.
schedule June 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i really liked this story. i love the pairings of jake / mark and lance / O'conner. i found it to be so hilarious at moments. i was so often literally laughing out loud (and for quite a long time at times). i really liked all of your characters. they made the story interesting. not a lot of sex though. it is my one and only complaint. but it was still a worthwhile read.
person Rae
schedule October 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was so much fun!!
It was a very feel-good read but had some weight to it as well. And I love your back-and-forth!

I'd love to see a Lance etc spin off, and pretty much anything else you feel like writing!
person Maz
schedule October 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story! It was cute and fluffy without it being over done and it was very well written. Even though the blindness was a big part of the story I didn't think it actually OWNED the story which was great, very refreshing from other similar plots! I loved all the characters and I hope there's a spin off soon!!
person Rainwater
schedule October 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely a treat! Thank you so much for sharing this lovely little gem. To be honest, I kind of wanted lance to get with mark lol just something about their chemistry. I hope to read more stories from you in the future.
person kssmedeadly
schedule October 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A spin-off would be amazing!! And I absolutely loved this story! I prolly shouldn't have read it at work, people kept looking at me strangely when I burst out laughing at certain points. Seriously though. <3
person ion242
schedule September 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
o'connor (i think i spelled it right) and lance sittin in a tree K I S S I N G. i really hope they have a relationship soon.
person ion242
schedule September 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
you know i would really love to see a business logo with a tree, the moon, an oilrig, a car and a naked woman. especially if the business had to deal with dairy.