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Nooo ! What's happened ? An attack ?
Grrr ! Another cliff ! Bad, bad writer ! :))
You took your time with Jacob and David's first time together, but it was worth the wait !! I can't stop drooling ! ^^
Update soon, please...

Oh no, not again, what is it with you and these evil cliffhangers. I was so swept up in an erotic wave of lust with Jacob and David and then you had to hit me with a CLIFFHANGER, NOOOOOOOOOOO. I hope Levi was able to protect Leandro from what I think was a car accident of some sort caused by someone wanting to kidnap Salvatore's little boy.

Where art thou EJ? I am getting worried you are slacking off so am motivating you to update! Even though I am depressed you mentioned there only like 5 chapters left. I hope you have an idea for another new story once you finish this. Night, I gotta get to bed so I don't oversleep and miss my bus ride in the morning or I will get terrorized by my boss for being late again.

Oh my, now that the Triad is making a move things are certainly going to heat up!;D But kinda' wonder if David is underestimating the professional kidnappers (though i don't see what else he could do really...)
And the story's almost done! I'll miss this fic heaps, but it's great that it'll be completed (and not abandoned like so many good stories on this site!)Until next time:D

Holy crap, things are seriously heating up now with the Triad closing in on them! It's like the calm before the storm and David/Jacob are right in the middle of it. How can you just end this in a few more chapters? There are so many side stories going on right now that I am pulling my hair out by the roots.

Please let there be a happy ending for everyone.

What's happening with Levi/Salvatore and Mason?

Bittersweet is a very strong person to have accomplished so much in his own young life. I want to know who this silent partner is, and I need to know NOW!!!

Bittersweet seems to care for Jacob. The silent partner too. Humm, who is he... Question, question... :)
So much in this chapter. Jacob's past. The triad. And the almost smex scene... Another cliff ! ^^
Can't wait for them to get wet and dirty... lol
Thank YOU for writing this great story and the steady updating !

Love it!!!

I am going to miss Jacob/David and Levi/Salvatore, and oh shit the whole damn gang! I hope you write more stories as exciting and addictive as this one has been.

I admire Bittersweet and am curious as to who his silent partner is and am thinking, Thompson?c

I hope David can keep Jacob safe from his uncle's plans and they stop it before too much bloodshed is spilled.

I can't wait for Jacob and David's 'first time' together!

Update soon!

Hey great chapter! I agree with you on the hospital thing I wouldn't wish it on anyone! You're also right when it comes the the nurses they are the be all to end all and I personaly don't think they get enough credit! As for cross walks... well the only thing I can tell you is LOOK BOTH WAYS even if the light says GO! I'm wondering now if the silent partner is Malcom could he have a decent bone in his body? Oh and even though there is only 5 chapters left I'll still review but I hope that you'll do another story when you have time this one is FANTASTIC! read ya laters!

Jake and David have the sweetest moments together. Love it.