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for Jacob and the Snake Charmer

by E.J

person dazedandconfused
schedule August 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was just thinking about something! I hope Sampson wasn't behind whatever is going on!!!! Oh my gosh! What if he is?!!! I am getting nervous now.........
person dazedandconfused
schedule August 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, E.J.? Can I get you motivated again? I am depressed because I have to go back to work tomorrow and face my evil boss from hell. It would make the morning easier if you updated and let me know what the heck happened in the last chapter! I mean get your tushy moving and get your pinky writing, LOL. Just kidding! I am worried about Levi and Leandro!
person Jade
schedule August 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!!! I just found it and read all the posted chapters-instead of doing my work haha. Then I thought seriously an Emir's son?? I'm middle eastern and I'm so tired of stories featuring the "evil sheik"-but then I thought about it and realized in your story there are many evil people and they're not all middle eastern at all-just evil. What was that quote? Something like evil is not a cultural phenomenon but a human one, and your story portrays that as well as having the ability to showcase sweet and sexy. Can't wait for the next chapter! Poor Levi and Leandro(not sure if that's the right spelling)!
person dazedandconfused
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gawd EJ!!!! What are you doing to me???!!!! You are going to kill me with these cliffhangers of yours!!! I am so pleased I was able to nudge you in the butt to update, LOL.

I never saw this cliffy coming!

"Bite me" "Eat me" "Lick me" Suck me"

That's all I can say about David and Jacob right now.

Levi and Leandro!!!!! Oh my gawd!!!!! What are you doing??!!!!! Please let them all be alright......

I have to run now before I miss my bus and if I do it's all your fault!!!!!! I hope I don't have a heart attack from the stress!!!!!!

You better update fast or I will come after you with a vengeance!!!

Just kidding, I luv ya!!!!!
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope Leandro and Levi are okay
person wolfluv
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
HEY HAS PLAY GIRL CALLED YOU YET???? BECAUSE DAMN!!!!! Well YEAH YOU KNOW! AWESOME AS ALWAYS!!! no rumors yet on the silent partner??? you are just evile!!! hee hee! read ya laters!!!
person reader1962
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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Dont wait to update, arg cliffhanger !
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well E.J., you know how to tug at my heartstring, don't ya?! I was reading along enjoying Jacob and David's first time together and was telling myself everything is perfect but then you had to throw that at me!!! Argh!!!!!
Please let Levi and Leandro be alright, oh and Sampson and Leandro's bodyguard too!

Please don't take another week or more to update again, I am begging you!
person CelticThunderFan
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
E.J. If you have a mailing list for updates to your stories, would you please add me to it.

David and Jacob's first time together couldn't have been more perfect but why did you to that to Levi and Leandro? What just happened? I was like coming down from my own orgasm after that hot sex and you had to ruin it on me by leaving us with another cliffhanger from hell!!!! WHY???????

I am relieved you updated because I was getting worried about you.

I am so happy you have sequels to this in the works!

person Jessie
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, let Levi and Leandro be safe! It must be a kidnapping attempt on little Leandro. They messed with the wrong father and Salvatore is going to be looking for blood!