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E.J., I just fainted and can't take the stress of they cliffhangers anymore! Talk about nerve wracking........ I hope Arturo doesn't get injured now too!

Ohhhh myyyyy, David is going to go ballistic when he finds his Jacob taken....waiting with bated breath for what happens next!

why why WHY ??? !!!!!! AARRGGHH I do not like cliffhangers ! Update soon very very soon !
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So, I am thinking or praying that David figured out in time what Jacob did and he will save him. Poor Salvatore, I think he's losing it too because he wanted David to hand over Jacob. I think I am going to have to start taking some sort of pills to calm my nerves due to your cliffhangers. Update as quick as you can, Katie.

Well, that chapter was great and the beginning was HILARIOUS!!!!!! I really hope that the Triad does not try and keep Jacob or hurt Artuo. Lord, David is going to flip when he finds out about Jacob and when he flips all better watch out because an angry David is a scary David. Update quickly.....please!

I just got home from work and checked in before eating my supper to find you UPDATED!!!!!! I am relieved Sampson is still David's man and not a traitor! I was a little bit worried. Why do you keep tormenting me with these cliffhangers?! I loved the beginning and how Arturo embarrassed Jacob, LOL. I think David might be able to track Jacob by his cellphone he took unless they take it away from him. They better not hurt Levi or Leandro and keep their word. I wonder if Arturo was taken along with Jacob since he caught up with him. The Triad is going to have their hands full, LOL. How dare Salvatore try talking David into handing over Jacob!!! Although, I can understand he's under extreme duress worrying about his son and Levi. Thanks for updating! I had a bad day at work and as usual the bus ride back and forth was hell, did I mention I have to change buses two times to get to work!

Hey, E.J., if AFF gives out awards or trophies you should get one for being the author of cliffhangers! I would nominate you!!!!

'sigh' You did it again ! lol
I have to say that it gives a strong 'tempo' to the story...
And I hope Jacob didn't do that for nothing ! Levi and Leandro have to be safe...
Just, David will go balistic... :)

Good lord, you did it to us again. I swear these cliffhangers are going to be the death of me, LOL. I hope David and Salvatore save the day for our boys.

Argh, these cliffhangers are agonizing to get through but I have a craving for them that is addictive. I am going to cry when it comes to an end and will miss everyone. They have made me laugh and cry and they feel like family.

Oh, I found a mistake and copy/pasted it below for you. Levi wasn't at the breakfast table and was kidnapped so you might want to fix this part, LOL.

Jacob did the only thing he could do when three sets of eyes turned to him; Levi was smirking, Mason had a disgruntled light to his eyes, and Lavinia kept to her carefully blank expression. Jacob fled. He ran like the wind. Sprinted away from the table so fast that his chair fell over in his haste to get away.