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Oh please UPDATE SOOOOOOOON, that was so good for a first chapter !!!!! I'm really eager to know what will happen next, and how will be the potential love interest of Jacob since it's hinted that it will be a criminal and drug lord...
By the way, Jacobe seems really sweet and courageous for living in such a neighboroud ! I hope that Lévi was truthfull with him saying that he loves him.

I really hope you continue this story and update frequently as your time allows. I thought the first chapter was very good and I really like Jacob and hope Levi doesn't get killed by this drug lord. So, their older brother has something to do with this and they think it's Levi's fault, very interesting. Why would he want to endanger his kid brothers. I hate Jacob's father, what happened to his mother (did she die) - I might have missed reading that will double check). Oh, this story reminds me slightly of the Carnalli series by an author here on AFF called Passhenette1. If you haven't read her stories, I highly recommend them especially about the Carnalli brothers so check them out.

This first chapter is really great !
And poor Jacob ! I'm afraid his brother lied to him... Yes, yes, I love you... Give me your money, now ! :(
Can't wait for more... ^^

I like this. And I also like NCIS and dont consider myself old.
I want to make sure I have this right Jacob is 19 and was his father kicked him out when he was 13. I am wondering how his brother knew where to find him, if they have not been in touch since he was kicked out. But if he only saw him when Levi needed money have they been in touch?

Oh my gosh! I really like this story and need to find out what happens to Levi and Jacob. This is a very exciting first chapter too. Oh, BTW, I love NCIS and I am only 23 and don't consider myself old, LOL.