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I had to mention that when Levi told Jacob to run it kind of reminded me of Bambi's mother telling Bambi to run and don't look back just keep running and then she was killed by a hunter..... sobs......

Tis reminds me of the Carnalli Complex series, but I am liking it, I can't wait for more. You have intrigued me. Thank you so much.

I just tried leaving a nice long review and when I typed the captcha thingy the whole darned thing disappeared and I lost it!!!!!! Grrrrrr.

Well, let's try again! I was getting ready for bed and decided to check one last time to see what stories had been updated since I last checked and imagine my surprise to find you had posted chapter 3!!!!!!!! I am a hyper person and when I found the new chapter up (and you updated yesterday too!!!) I nearly had a seizure I was so excited.... JK.

Well, dah, now that I think about it, it makes sense that Levi would end up in the possession of Salvatore. I think Salvatore is going to have his hands full and it ain't gonna be easy because I bet Levi is going to make his life a living hell. I wouldn't doubt if he tries to escape so he can go rescue Jacob too.

I wanted to cuddle Jacob and soothe away his fears. I felt so bad for him the way he lost his mom and how close they were.

I wonder what David is planning to discuss with Jacob....

Goodnight and thanks for updating so fast!!!!! You rock!!!!!!

I know Levi made some very dumb mistakes, but still to sell your own kin is pretty harsh. I hope Levi doesn't suffer to badly. And Poor Jacob, my heart was breaking for him. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Wow! I can honestly say I did't see that twist coming. I figured Jacob would go with the stranger, but I can't say I am dissapointed at all. Either way this is going to be a great story. I can't wait for the next chapter, super excited to see what happens to Jacob next hehe. c;

Please, please, pretty please update soon this marvellous story ! I want to know what fate will await Jacob and Levi... a good slash with a mob story I say "please carry on !!!!".

I've been lurking around here and watching the Stanley Cup Playoffs, "Go Bruins!" and just saw that you posted chapter 2!!!! Yeah!!!! So excited because mob slash stories make are like a sugar fix for me. Levi has really grown on me and I hope he doesn't get killed or badly hurt. I am hoping since David is in a sense their 'brother' he won't kill them! I cheered Jacob on once he faced his fear and turned around running back into danger to help his bro. What happened to Jacob that he had ended up in the hospital?!!! I am sure you will explain. I hope Jacob didn't knock himself out ramming his head into the guy trying to punch Levi! Please update again soon!!!!!!! I hate cliffhangers, but love them too even though they cause me to have anxiety attacks, LOL.

Great start! Can't wait to read more!

Great first chapter! Like this story already, but a little confused about the family relationships... so JJ is the mother's son form a second relationship (after having two children with the Judge, who had a son form a previous relationship)?
Can't wait to read more! Cheers!

This was awesome! Please continue soon!