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June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The title intrigued me and I couldn't resist reading it. I am definitely hooked now. I love the fast pace and the action. I feel so bad for Levi and Jacob. Hopefully, Levi will learn his lesson without too much pain. I am glad David took Jacob and Salvatore Levi, it's more appropriate. Good start and I look forward to more.
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June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, that's one hell of a beginning 3 chapters. I gotta say that I'm itching for more of this story. I hope to be reading more soon and thanks so much for writing and sharing.
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June 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I wish the chapters were longer :( So excited about this story. So does Levi and Jacob's father think of David as his son or no?
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June 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! So suspenseful I felt I was holding my breath along with Jacob! Really curious about what led to Jacob being in hospital all those years back... and I wonder if David knew Jacob liked him... Guess we'll find out!
Many thanks for the chapter!
Many thanks for the chapter!
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June 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for clearing up the relationship-brother thing for me BTW!
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June 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was holding my breath the entire time Levi and Jacob were trying to escape and then when he called out "David" I wanted to cover his mouth with my hand! I am dying to find out all the juicy details about the Judge and his different wives and who Jacob's mom was and does he have family on her side. Is Salvatore going to turn out to be also known as David?
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June 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Now when it actually got interesting you just stop?! So not fair!
I like the first two chapters, I hope you will keep up good work.
I like the first two chapters, I hope you will keep up good work.
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June 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
These first two chapters are attention-grabbing! Love it already! Eagerly awaiting the next update.
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June 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hello! Wow, I reeeeally enjoyed the first two chapters! Haha, I couldn't help to be disappointed when I realized that there are 'just' two chapters yet! Please update soon! I have a feeling this plot is made of awesomeness! :D
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June 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was waiting for this update... Thank you ! :)
Sooo David is the bad boy ?! Is he secretly in love with his little brother ? Even if he's not his real one.
That was a mean cliff ! I can't wait for more ! Update soon, please.
Sooo David is the bad boy ?! Is he secretly in love with his little brother ? Even if he's not his real one.
That was a mean cliff ! I can't wait for more ! Update soon, please.