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September 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
If Levi dies I am going to kill myself!!!!!!!!!!
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September 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
To quote another favorite author of mine, AriieObssession, Holy Fuck Biscuit!!!!!!!!!!
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September 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! My own BP just skyrocketed to dangerous levels. What are you doing to Levi? Malcolm might deserve it but not Levi. If Levi dies, I am going to be very, very upset. Oh, and we still don't know what's happened to Jacob and Arturo either.
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September 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
no, no, no, no, not my poor brave Levi...I was so proud of him for being so brave because love made him brave and now this...arrrrgh!!! And we have not even come to my poor Jacob, if I didn't love you so much I would hate you (just kidding). How could I hate my most beloved author. Awesome update as usual, cliffie as usual, will be waiting like crazy like usual.
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September 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! The plot thickens! I like! =D
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September 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
First of all I wanna say I really enjoy your story (even though after the beginning I hoped the David character would have a lil bit more of an asshole persona in general and not be so soft/fluffy inside).
There's just one thing I wanted to correct in the latest chapter (even if it could be considered nitpicking lol): You kinda associate fever with a "slow" and "steady" pulse (Text samples: "Leandro's cheeks were flushed and rosy, his pulse was slow but strong, and he was hot to the touch"). Dunno if it's really intended to sound that way or if I'm misunderstanding but I just want to clarify at this point: If you have a fever, your pulse is real fast, and not slow. So it's the exact opposite. A nice simple and short explanation why can be found here: http://wiki.answers.com/Q/How_does_fever_affect_pulse_rate
Like I said, didn't want to nitpick but I'm a vet, I couldn't help it.
Looking forward to the next chapter! This is a meanie cliffhanger T____T
There's just one thing I wanted to correct in the latest chapter (even if it could be considered nitpicking lol): You kinda associate fever with a "slow" and "steady" pulse (Text samples: "Leandro's cheeks were flushed and rosy, his pulse was slow but strong, and he was hot to the touch"). Dunno if it's really intended to sound that way or if I'm misunderstanding but I just want to clarify at this point: If you have a fever, your pulse is real fast, and not slow. So it's the exact opposite. A nice simple and short explanation why can be found here: http://wiki.answers.com/Q/How_does_fever_affect_pulse_rate
Like I said, didn't want to nitpick but I'm a vet, I couldn't help it.
Looking forward to the next chapter! This is a meanie cliffhanger T____T
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September 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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September 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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September 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Go check the forum page there is a whole topic on this and you can ask a moderator for help too.
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September 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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