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June 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Better and better. I am loving the characters you've created and I'm glad we'll be hearing more about Levi. I really came to like the little druggie by the end of the second and third chapters. Please keep the writing coming. Seeing a new chapter up totally makes my day!
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June 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am addicted to this story!!! :D Thank you for the updates!! And Arturo is the "most dangerous of the three" brothers we first met on that street corner!! :) I'm sure Jacob will be thrilled to have him back in his life...lol
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June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this story is so intriguing, love it :)
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June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very informative! Thanks! I'm very happy you decided on sending Jacob with David. :)
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June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Many thanks for the quick update! Thank goodness both Levi and Jacob got out alive ('cause of the summary I was really worried about Levi being killed). Why do I get the feeling Salvatore and David are related... Maybe I'm barking up the wrong tree though... So very interesting to have Jacob end up being David's captive - i didn't see that coming, but am glad for it!
Can't wait for another chapter! I really hope both brothers will be reunited (but I wonder why Salvatore wanted Levi - is there a past between them? I guess we'll find out!)
Can't wait for another chapter! I really hope both brothers will be reunited (but I wonder why Salvatore wanted Levi - is there a past between them? I guess we'll find out!)
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June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing so far, I love it.
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June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh. I would love to know what transpired between David and Salvatore when they were talking. I am loving this.
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June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Waaah, another chapter already - made my day! And holy hell - David is quite...forward, isn't he? I like that! Haha! Very nice chapter! Update soon!
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June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
like the story and the quick updates : )
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June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hm.... Stumbled onto this story and definitely enjoying it. Hoping to read more soon.
I've always had a soft spot for dark tales with unexpected twists (light or darker or ironic), and so this work of yours has caught my interest. Please update soon!
David and Jacob, hm? Dark, but enticing. I really am looking forward to reading more.
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu
I've always had a soft spot for dark tales with unexpected twists (light or darker or ironic), and so this work of yours has caught my interest. Please update soon!
David and Jacob, hm? Dark, but enticing. I really am looking forward to reading more.
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu