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Omg, I so in love with you, haha! Your story is AWESOME! And you're such a fast writer - which is so great! :D That way we don't have to wait long to know what will happen to poor Jacob! :/ Update soon! :D

I have a feeling David was just messing with Jacob. I bet Jacob didn't really have to sign that document, David just manipulated him into doing it so he could be with him. He knows Jacob wouldn't talk, but he guilt tripped him using Levi. I am glad to see Levi won't have it too bad, will you do the story from his pov?

So great ! You really wrote well the boy's despair ! And you updated very fast ! Thank you !!
Poor Jacob. Everyone is a bastard with him but his father is the worse !
Now, he's going to depend on David...
Can't wait for more :)

Oh, my gawd, that freaking asshole David and his dickwad of a father!!! I mean, poor Jacob! Hasn't he been through enough in his young life?!! I bet Levi will be pissed when he finds out about this contract. Well, shit, I bet that David is going to be kind of upset with his staff and whoever was responsible for keeping an eye on Jacob when he gets home and finds him nearly dead of starvation! I don't usually swear in my reviews but there is something about this one that brings out the raving review lunatic in me, LOL. Update soon, I want to know what happens next!!!

I fell in love with this story from the first chapter. It's so rare lately to find somthing worth reading, and sooo good at that. Thank you.

Oh, that was interesting finding out David and Salvatore are brothers, nice twist and I should have caught on to it myself because the clues were there. I hate Jacob's father and can't believe he's his biological father after what he has done to his youngest son. I hope Jacob will be alright, my heart melted for him. I want to punch David in his smug face.

I hope that if Jacob refused his offer that David really wouldn't have shot him in the head, would he have? I don't believe he could have but not sure because of who his own father is. I am glad Levi is getting help with his drug addiction. I am very worried about Jacob and need to find out what happens when David returns. I hope you go into detail of his reaction to finding Jacob near deaths door from starvation. Will he feel guilt or anger at the staff or be angry with Jacob? Update soon, I really like this story.

Holly!!! This story is soooooooo AMAZING!!!! I'm so in loooooooovveeeeee!!! ;D
I really can't wait to read more off this!! It's so well witten and full of twisted suprises!!!
Please more!! Thanks alot for this story! =D

You're story is really starting to pull me in. I am loving it. Please update often, I also hope that we get to see some more of Levi.

I really like this story!!! Please update soon!! I want to know what happened to Jacob!!!