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fuck dunno who Arturo is again but going to remember that's for sure. Really love the background on David; makes him less of a bastard lol.

You are officially my favorite writer on this site!! I'm obsessed with all of your stories! Your writing sucks me right in... i'm always sad when i reach the end of the page! I'll be patiently waiting for more!... or maybe not so patiently. Also, I hope you plan to continue "more than a servant"? ... i really like Ivory.

Ha! Silk panties for our Jacob. I don't even have any silk panties, maybe I'm missing out. Undergarments aside, another great chapter. I really liked Arturo and am getting nervous about the eventual fallout between David and his real dad. I suppose that will all occur in due time. Looking forwards to reading more. (Oh, and glad to know our lovable "druggie" is gonna get his own lovin')

Ya just gotta love Arturo and believe you me I do! Hey, whatever does David have in store for Jacob? Silk panties? delectable and yummy. I hope someday David can put his father out of business and take over the running of the family business for himself.

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I like this story but in the last chapter you pretty much changed Jacobs whole character, he went from being shy, scared and slightly suicidal, to being flirty and fun with no real motive for this transition . It feels like your characters weren't developing the way you wanted them to quickly enough so you completely changed their personalities, even David is being more open than the previous chapters with no real reason behind it. But other than the last chapter it's not a bad story , it just needs some adjustments

I totally love the way you are writing these characters and how they are developing as the story progresses. I kind of disliked David until I got to know him and the reasons behind the way he acted at first. I admire David for standing up to his father and protecting Jacob. Please don't change the way you write and continue on the same course. I think Arturo is the perfect bodyguard for Jacob but I just hope they don't kill each other, LOL. I don't think Milo is going to live down the curse of spongebob, LOL. I am looking forward to David and Jacob's date.

Great chapter! Jacob and David are so cute together! Smex was hot. Wonder if Bittersweet is still alive...

I need a cold shower now !! That was HOT !
That was David, of course ! He can't stop touching Jacob... Well, he waited for so long...
This 'Bittersweet' is weird. I hope David will know what's happened.
Again, thank you for the fast update. :)

Wow, what a great read this is and I don't know how I missed reading it the first time around but will be sure not to again. I would love to learn more about this Bittersweet and hope he's not dead but he must be if Jacob hasn't seen him since the attack. If it wasn't Bittersweet, who was the other victim and did Jacob know him? I think Arturo will turn out to be a very good friend of Jacob's and have a feeling he's a jokester. I like David and am glad he's not as bad as I thought he was going to be.