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June 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope David doesn't lose his temper too easily. Those macho/dom men always tend to fly off the handle in stories, so I'm interested to see 1) will he do that now? and if he does, then how "mad" is he compared to "annoyed." And if he doesn't, 2) what was his real impression of what Jacob was doing? :) Can't wait to see! I'm loving getting to know these characters.
Hasta Luego!
Hasta Luego!
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June 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think that David is perhaps a little bit jealous and if I were Michael I would get the hell out of the club. After all Jacob has been through, how could David think that Jacob could have felt comfortable with Patrick and his goof ball followers. Didn't he see how they were ignoring Jacob and how Jacob felt uncomfortable around them?
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June 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say how happy i am about how often you update this story. I enjoy reading this a little too much and its nice to come here pretty much everyday and see a chapter waiting for me to gobble up. Thanks!!
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June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was like "What the heck is this." I was confused on the theme at first but gave it a shot.
Chicago? My hometown? Not only that but this is kind of erotic and kinky. The brothers are weird as hell and I really like the deception and mind fuckery.
Chicago? My hometown? Not only that but this is kind of erotic and kinky. The brothers are weird as hell and I really like the deception and mind fuckery.
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June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Laughed so much at the beginning of this chapter (:! Arturo is so amusing! Would like to find out more of how Levi is doing, if possible. What do "pendejo" and "Hijoputa" mean?
As always, can't wait for the next update!
As always, can't wait for the next update!
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June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
lol ! Yes I think Arturo and Jacob are going to be best friend !
Arturo is a funny one ! Though, must be dangerous when he want...
Who is Shane ? Don't remember. I need to read the story again...
Anticipation... Is the best ! :)
Can't wait for moaarr !
Arturo is a funny one ! Though, must be dangerous when he want...
Who is Shane ? Don't remember. I need to read the story again...
Anticipation... Is the best ! :)
Can't wait for moaarr !
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June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, the exchange between Arturo and Jacob were delightful. :) Though I am somewhat wary about a few things Arturo said concerning his dad--namely, Emmanuel not being very pleased with David's attention on Jacob. I'm just sure that spells trouble for the poor guy. BUT a more "pressing" issue is of course the panties he's going to have to wear! hahaha XD hope he survives the night...
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June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! Seriously, silk panties? What is going through David's lecherous mind? Oh my, poor little Jacob but I bet he wears them and enjoys it too! I don't know why.... but can't seem to get the theme song of SpongeBob square pants out of my mind.........
Arturo is becoming a fast favorite of mine!
Arturo is becoming a fast favorite of mine!
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June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am glad Jacob and Arturo are getting along, it is nice he can have a friend. Will any more of Emmanuales kids show up later in the story?
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June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WELL in the previous page I had to wipe the drool from my mouth this time I had to wiped the tears from my face from laughing so hard!!! Lil Turo hee hee hee I am totally loving that one! read ya laters!