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for Jacob and the Snake Charmer

by E.J

person cheesekun
schedule June 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter! Liked Jealous David, can't wait to see how this plays out (but feel kinda bad for Jacob's new acquaintance...). David's a bit of a perv with those panties and all (in a good way though! ;))
person Jessie
schedule June 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow, Jacob is starting to get kind of feisty and I love his new attitude. I can actually see steam boiling from David's ears and nose, LOL. He reminds me of a bull in the arena getting stomping it's hoof to get ready to charge at it's prey. Oh, and I think Jacob is going to start wearing silk panties from now on because he enjoys the feel of them, giggles.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule June 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story so much and you are really awesome to update it so fast for us. I think Jacob is going to see another side of David very soon. Patrick and his friends especially that slut are very disgusting creatures. I hope Jacob doesn't wet his new silk panties but he just might when David comes looking for him and especially since he's with his new friend Michael.
person wolfluv
schedule June 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WELL.... I DID FEEL LIKE SLAPPING THE DINK BUT..... It was gratifing that he realized his mistake I just wished J was there to hear him tell the 30yro pussy that he could basicly throw a hotdog down that hallway and NEVER touch the sides! hee hee hee I just hope he doesn't blame J for finding other entertainment! read ya laters!
person Jensen
schedule June 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, since Jacob wants to play with fire by trying to get David jealous then I think he's going to get burned. I don't think he's in the position to piss David off like that. Did he forget the contract? I just hope Michael doesn't get caught in the crossfire. Jacob doesn't want to see that bad side again of David again but I think it's going to come out. It's all that Patrick's and the hussy's fault!
person Error
schedule June 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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awwwww the ending was so adorable awww =w =
schedule June 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Some great David/Jacob loving. Poor Jacob, I hope they find out who raped him and make him pay. Does he recall who did it? Or cn't he remember. I know it was mentioned in one of the previous chapters.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule June 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the fast update and I would love to read more soon!
person dazedandconfused
schedule June 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey, how could David had not realized how left out Jacob was feeling. I dislike Patrick and his friends. I hope that David doesn't hurt Michael because he seems nice. I think Jacob is going to end up having a silk panties fetish for the rest of his life, LOL.
person miles
schedule June 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think they're going to remember their first date ! lol
Another chapter tomorrow ? You spoiled us !
:))