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for Jacob and the Snake Charmer

by E.J

schedule June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay Levi chapter! Can't wait for more.
person miles
schedule June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, a little teaser ! Very promising ! :)
Seeing poor Levi like that was very sad...
He had a fucked life. Well, he had everything but love...
His father is a bastard but where is the mother ?

Salvatore is in looovvee !! :P
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my poor Levi! I want to hug you. I kind of like Salvatore even though we don't know him that well yet and at least he's trying to help Levi even though it's kind of like Levi just made a pact with the devil. Will you be writing a side story for Levi or will his be part of Jacob's too?
person Jessie
schedule June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you let us know how Levi is doing and what Salvatore's motives were. I look forward to reading more of these two.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope that Salvatore can help Levi straighten out the mess he has made of his life with drugs even though most of it is probably Malcolm's fault for being such a prick for a father. When they were checking his blood work for drugs, did Salvatore have them check for STD's too, just curious.
person L.S.
schedule June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Was this chapter a hot tamale chapter then?? haha :) But good to see Levi and our other Snake Charmer! haha
person lunamist
schedule June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Glad to hear about Levi again. I love the way you've made him a sympathetic character even though he's done some pretty asinine things in his life. His love and desire to keep Jacob safe is a wonderful saving grace. I'm still loving this story and although I may not review every chapter, I read them with glee. Thanks so much.
person iriskzk1
schedule June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
O_o Salvatore just gets right down to it doesn't he. Glad we are getting into Levi's story now as well.
person dazedandconfused
schedule June 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, poor Jacob, David ate him for a midnight snack/desert, LOL. What a freaking hot chapter, I want more!!!!!!! Oh, I wonder how Levi is getting along with Salvatore.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule June 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks again for the fast update! Jacob is so adorable and I can understand why David feels the way he does about him. Jacob must have felt like he was a lollypop, LOL. David is so damn sexy.

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