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for Jacob and the Snake Charmer

by E.J

person iriskzk1
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that Jacob and his cousin was saved but oh God, poor Arturo.
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor Arturo, glad they were able to find Jacob so quick, and now he has a cousin, awesome!
person Anon
schedule September 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was hoping you would find time to update at least on the weekend but it looks like this story is on indefinite hold. I hate when I get pulled in by frequent updates and then when story is nearly near the end like you mentioned it comes to a standstill and readers are left in an unending limbo of wondering and waiting. It's so not fair to all who faithfully rated/reviewed this story.
person wolfluv
schedule September 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
"Holy Crip It's A Crappel!" That was my first thought! Stolen from Family Guy.... Anywho WOW that was a Humdinger of a revilation! Now it makes me really wonder who Jacobs real dad is.... I think I know why Malcom was shot it was Jacobs uncle? Wow the plot just twists and twrils out of control I LOVE IT!!!! Anywho great chapter! read ya laters!!!
schedule September 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Talk about a family reunion
person iriskzk1
schedule September 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
........and the so the drama commences!!!!! With kidnappings, shoot outs, dead brother twins, secret lives; feel like i'm watching a soap opera only it's a really good one. LOL
person SlapNuts
schedule September 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dude, what a major disappointment that this story seems to be on the backburner but that's the way it seems to go around this place. Anyways, kudos to author for sharing what you did and congrats on the hits/review you received, you deserved every single one of them. Cheers!
person dazedandconfused
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
E.J., I read your message under profile page and all I can say is that now you know what we feel like being left hanging with your evil cliffhangers, LOL. Take care and feel better soon.
person dazedandconfused
schedule September 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am rather getting tired of kicking you in the butt, LOL. But, here we go.................. did ya feel it?
person SlapNuts
schedule September 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Not, Levi!