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for Jacob and the Snake Charmer

by E.J

person Jensen
schedule June 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ooops, doopsy, I mean was Maria Salvatore's wife and Leandro's mother not Levi, LOL. Well, maybe Levi can be Leandro's step-mummy later, LOL. I think you would have caught on that I mistyped that.
person L.S.
schedule June 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Woah! What's he doing out of Colombia?! haha Also, I am a little confused as to why Salvatore isn't relating Levi's experiences with his (or his sibling's) own experiences. I mean, unless Emmanuel actually went through the motions of actually pretending to care more than Levi's dad did? Anyways, great chapter! I bet David isn't going to be too happy...
schedule June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I am glad to see Jacob and Levi don't have it as bad as I thought they would. They are both well cared for. But I am sure something will happen that will cause drama for both of them. Can't wait for more.
person miles
schedule June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Did Salvatore knew about the past abuse ? T.T
It's going to be a loonngg year of recovering... He needs to win the trust of Levi before all...
Thanks for telling about the mother :)
More soon ?
person cheesekun
schedule June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor Levi! I really feel for him. Glad to hear there'll be more Levi and Slavatore in future chapters as i love this couple! Loved the description of the colonial Spanish house btw :) Wonder why Salvatore is so determined to help Levi (apart form his thing for blondes)...is there a past there? Thanks for clearing up the hospital thing for me! It sounds like Levi was as badly treated as Jacob (but in a different way) - did something specific happen in the past, or is his desire to forget everything sort of a culmination of his being downtrodden/ overlooked/ neglected?
Thanks for the chapter! Looking forward to more ;)
person Jessie
schedule June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am so relieved that Salvatore is taking it slow and seems to understand what Levi is going through. I am surprised he has such a gentle side but wonder if it has to do with the child whose laughter Levi heard.
person luc
schedule June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
there isn't spanish translate in your fic, i google the spanish but can't all translate. will waited for your next updated.
person Saminafa
schedule June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh Gosh!!! I really like Salvatore!!! He seems to want to rake care of poor Levi!
I really love these two! As much as I love David and Jacob! ;D All ur characters are so well written! I trully LOVE this story! And the fact that u update every day is marvelous!!!
I really can't wait for more of this story!!! Thanks alot! ;)
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am glad we found out about Levi's mom and how she stuck up for him like a lioness against Malcolm. I am worried Levi may have also been sexually abused at one time and wonder if it was someone in the family. I really admire Salvatore for trying to help Levi even though he has his own agenda by doing it.
person dazedandconfused
schedule June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG, another Levi and Salvatore chapter!! I think Levi is wrong in his opinion about Salvatore with the exception that I think Salvatore is eventually going to give in to Levi but not in the way he thinks. Yes, he is all hardness and strength but his heart is finding it's way to Levi. I will be happy for Levi once he realizes how special he is.