rate_review Reviews

Omg ! This chapter is so thrilling !
I love the contrast between 'the brotherly' scene and the violence with the boss cartel.
David's going to be so mad ! Arrgg, update soon, please...
Salvator has a son ? Sweet. :)

Oh no, a cliffy! So we finally meet Emanual - he's as frightening as David/ Arturo describe him. Seems like all my questions were answered in this chapter; thanks for that!:) Good to see Levi again in this chapter!

Dx Poor Arturo D:
But aww =w = I like the brotherly and slightly protective relationship between him and Jacob
Keep it that way :D
it's so cute :D

Oh my gawd, evil cliffhanger of doom, how could you? I love cliffhangers so just kidding. I am surprised Emanuel got through David's guards (which I assume he has) and who let him in the house? I admire Arturo for sticking up to his asshole of father. I hope David comes soon before things get worse for Jacob and Arturo.

Not nice to leave it there. I love this story

Wow, Salvador has a kid, can't wait to see how Levi reacts to that. Poor Arturo and Jacob, they were just chillaxn then Emanuel had to ruin it all.

Oh no, a cliffhanger!!!!!! Yipes!

Arturo is pretty darn brave to stick up to his father like that and something tells me his father is going to feel his wrath after Emanuel knocked Jacob out. I think Arturo is totally crazy with rage now and hope he doesn't kill his father or he will never be the same person. I don't think he will but I think his father is going to find out his son is a lot braver and loyal than he gives him credit for.

Emanuel is damned lucky I am not in the story or I would have kneed the bastard right in his balls so fast he wouldn't know what hit him and he would be the one who was floored! If Levi wasn't the one who was abused, don't tell me it was Arturo?!! I hope someone saves Arturo and Jacob before Emanuel does too much harm to them.

I have to tell you that I am charmed by this story very much. It's so good and I am really into the characters and what they are going through so that's a testament to your writing skills. I am sure you have figured out by now that for some silly reason (I wonder what that could be) most readers are addicted to slash stories like this and they are some of the most popular stories here on AFF. I was very proud of Jacob for attempting to help Arturo and I am just upset his plan to hit him on the head didn't work. I hope help comes soon or I am worried what Emanuel will do to both of them. I think you are fast becoming a cliffhanger whore, LOL. I say that with the outmost respect for you.

Oh, was Maria Leandro's mother and Levi's wife? I will go back to read not sure if I missed that info when I first read the chapter. I liked that we got a little bit of both world's in this chapter; Levi & Salvatore and Jacob and Arturo. By the way, I loved that Jacob felt like Arturo was his brother and he was actually happy and carefree for just a moment. Why is Emanuel at David's house and why did he think it was alright to just walk into David's bedroom? It was his room, right or was it Jacob's? Anyway, I hope Arturo kicks his dad's ass for hurting Jacob or if he can't it doesn't look good for either of them right now. I hope help comes soon.