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June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
And David really get balistic !! He doesn't do half things !
Poor Jacob ! The snake wants to talk with him ! Bad, really bad !
Can't wait for more... :)
Poor Jacob ! The snake wants to talk with him ! Bad, really bad !
Can't wait for more... :)
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June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I will be so happy when The Walking Dead is back with new episode because Sunday evenings are so boring now. Wow, David is a super bad ass and Emanuel is going to regret taking Jacob from his home for sure. I liked seeing this side of him even though he kind of scared me, LOL. I like Valéria and am glad she was there to help Jacob. I can't wait to meet David's grandfather. I hope Arturo gets better soon and am sorry he was so badly injured by his own bloody father but have a feeling Emanuel will soon know what it's like to hurt.
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June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy shit is getting real! But if Emanuel has more sons wont they want the throne too?
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June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
:)
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June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
HO HO HO HA HA HA!!!!! "BID DADDY GONNA COME AND BEAT THE BROWN OFF SOMEBODYS ASS!!!!" HEE HEE HEE O O O YEAH!!!! I AM SO LOVING THIS!!! read ya laters!!!!!
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June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
YAY GO DAVID!!!!!
The bit about the grandfather was a bit unexpected but :D CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT YAY
The bit about the grandfather was a bit unexpected but :D CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT YAY
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June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
what an exciting chapter. David is crazy cool here. Lotsa guts to go up to his father. Horrible father by the way for hitting Jacob so badly. Thank goodness Valerie is a such a kind lady. Can't wait for David and Jacob to be reunited.
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June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ah, that was wonderful first chapter. :) fast paced and all. And it made me cry lol I've been ignoring this story because for some reason im put off with the title and i dont even know why. And i tried it today because notice how frequent you update and i am for a treat :D that was great and i cant wait for more *offs to read*
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June 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... that's a way to sooth Emanuel's anger, right? :D It couldn't have gone worse, I think. No, instead of trying for Emanuel to see reason, they will have to be on guard 24/7. Haha, you don't fuck with ppl like Emanuel and come unscratched out of it. Good job, I enjoyed it.
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June 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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you can translate engles to spanish i hope you choose to huze it
It a very good story keep it up
you can translate engles to spanish i hope you choose to huze it
It a very good story keep it up