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for Jacob and the Snake Charmer

by E.J

person Katniss Everdeen
schedule July 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! Their Uncle Terry was molesting Mason who was protecting Jacob from him! Well, unfortunately, that can happen in some families so I am glad this is just fiction and not really happening. I guess Mason isn't so bad like I first thought and can't wait for him to be reunited with his brothers. I think once they are all together they will make a formidable team. Great chapter and I had a wonderful 4th of July! Fireworks were spectacular!
person Error
schedule July 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
:O Oh noes D: Mason D:
awww =w = brother time =w =
person luc
schedule July 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
so sweet.....will always waiting for your updated. i feel more mistery came up, it will getting more and more interesting to read your fic.
person wolfluv
schedule July 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed that chapter! DON'T tell me it's the uncle that might have raped him and put him in the hospital? I LOVE THE FACT that Mason tried to save him! I did the same thing for my younger sisters... It's just amazing how many "PED'S" there are in this world.... they say that sometimes the one that gets molested usually turns into one... I didn't thank GOD but nobody knew about it for years if I had to do it all over again I would still protect my sisters to my dying breath even now! read ya laters...
person miles
schedule July 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ohh God ! I though Mason was a bastard but he protected his little brother ! ToT
I hope this fucked uncle is going to pay ! Please tell me he's not the one who raped and hurt Jacob !
The brothers are getting close. It's great. :)
Until next chapter...
person Jessie
schedule July 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy, talk about family demons and stuff. Geeze, poor Mason, he was actually Jacob's and probably Levi's too, protector and I saw him as someone to be suspicious of and didn't like him. That goes to show you should judge people before you get to know them. After seeing how Jacob reacts to pain killers, I hope David never lets him get drunk! I loved this family reunion between the brothers and now I want to see Mason become part of their new found brotherhood. Awesome chapter! I hope David deals with their uncle.
schedule July 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh, more family drama coming up!
person Saminada
schedule July 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!! OH MY GOG!!!!!! What a twist!!!! We have'nt meet Mason yet but poor guy!!! I wanna hug him!
I hope that Levi's not right but I have a feeling something's up with the oncle! Grrrr
David's got alot of reserch to do! Gosh! ;/

Please more off this story! I LOVE it!!!
person CelticThunderFan
schedule July 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, gosh, my heart totally goes out to poor Mason! If it's true about the uncle, I hope he pays for what he has done. This chapter was very uplifting and enjoyable to read except for the part about hearing what happened to Mason. It's nice seeing everyone get along without fighting.
person Sagan
schedule July 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really nice story. I like the characters and situation of it :)
Though as a spanish speaking person, I really feel irked by the bad translations you have been using. I do not blame you though...google translatos can be that bad in cases. But I would like to also ask you to not confuse colloquial expressions from Mexican spanish into supposedly Colombian spanish."Pinche cabron" is only used by mexicans.
Anyways, good writing and good luck. It has been a really nice reading so far.