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for Jacob and the Snake Charmer

by E.J

person iriskzk1
schedule July 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Jacob's mom had ties with the TRIAD!!!!!! How many more twists are you going to throw at me!?!?!? LOL I can't wait to see Malcolm's reaction when he see's that his whole world is pretty much falling down around him and I love Arturo, he is too funny. I am so in love with your story right now, you just keep me coming back. Feel like I'm tuning in weekly for a show on HBO.
person cheesekun
schedule July 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for some Levi/Salvator in this chap!:D
But poor Mason...what a phone call to receive right after watching that dvd... Hope Uncle Terry suffers horribly.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule July 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, I don't know where to begin. I really enjoyed Salvatore and Levi that was really sizzling hot. I enjoyed the comic relief between Jacob/Arturo/Levi very much. I knew Brenner was going to find something out about Terry but when he brought the evidence to David I wanted to cover my eyes when he was watching the video. I hope Jacob doesn't find them. I have faith that Brenner will make Terry pay for what he did to Mason. How could you do that to Mason after all he's been through?! Poor Mason!!!!!!!!! I know we haven't met him yet but I already feel like I know him through Jacob.
person Jessie
schedule July 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG, thanks for updating so fast! I loved when Arturo pressed his finger against Jacob's belly and he laughed like the Pillsbury dough boy! That was so funny and I could see the image of Jacob and the dough boy in my head, LOL. I laughed and also swooned reading the first half and then later when Brenner arrived with proof for David of what their Uncle Terry did to Mason my skin literally crawled. Oh, is Uncle Terry their mother's brother? Just wondering. Also, when David's mother called saying "You have to do something, Mason just tried to kill himself!" What did she mean by, David has to do something? Does she mean that she wants to keep his suicide attempt out of the press so the family name won't be tainted or something?
person Jensen
schedule July 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was reading along and really enjoying what was happening between everyone and was laughing myself silly then fantasizing myself as Jacob and Levi with David and Salvatore. I told myself finally life is good for these guys..... then...... WHAMO..... Mason, Mason, Mason, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
person wolfluv
schedule July 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!!! TWO COUNT THEM TWO IN LIKE WHAT ONE DAY!!!! I love how all the loose ends are coming together the same way the boy are!!!! I LOVE IT!
You neve know what you are capable of until it happens so to speak thanks for the last shout out to me.... read ya laters!!!
person miles
schedule July 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
There is so much emotion in this chapter... I'm crying for Mason... T.T
The mother is going to divorce ? Humm, Malcom will be very mad ! Apparence is all...
Thanks for the fast update ! :))
person Raya
schedule July 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am obsessed with this story. The plot line is amazing. Seriously five stars two thumbs up 100% to the author. I'm so looking forward to new chapters
person Anon
schedule July 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't think that Mason should be with guys cuz after all, he had bad experiences with that molester. Still, on other hand, whoever could help Mason and make him happy in the end would be fine....
person dazedandconfused
schedule July 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank God Mason is going to be alright and that he is going to go home with David and see Jacob again. I like Lavinia too she's not as bad a person as I first thought she was. There you go, first impressions, like I did with Mason before know any fact. Don't judge a book by it's cover. Now, I am worried that Jacob's uncle from Shanghai will come after him!