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October 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awww poor Arturo. Can't imagine him not smiling and joking.
That was a lovely ending and I'm sure Arturo will be okay, (well as okay as someone who have spent months being abused, I'm guessing, can be) now that he is surrounded by love.
That was a lovely ending and I'm sure Arturo will be okay, (well as okay as someone who have spent months being abused, I'm guessing, can be) now that he is surrounded by love.
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October 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WHAT?! You can't end it like! What happens with Arturo? Will there be a sequel? There had to be!
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October 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, no offense but this epilogue literally sucked and I think we deserved a better resolution. You might want to add a tag story is complete too.
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October 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! I'm so sad to see the end of this story! I've really enjoyed every minute, and hope that you plan on writing more about these characters. Thanks for the update, and for the entire story.
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October 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved it
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October 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved this story! So sad to see it come to an end. Hopefully there will be a sequel? Maybe? Possibly? Pretty pretty pretty please? :-P
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October 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So I never reviewed but I've been reading since the first chapter was posted and now that it's over, I'm like "Wait, what did I used to do with my life again?"
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September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME BUT TRAGIC CHAPTER! "WHAT DO YOU MEAN LAST CHAPTER???" You're not going to write the fight scene but go straight to Epilog? Well Either way I'm still going to read! I am wondering though who the guy was that raped Turo and why he kept his face away from the camera... Well I have enjoyed reading your writing and I hope that when you're up to it you'll write another awesome story! read ya laters!!!
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September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
David came for his love, I am happy. I need a happy reunion in the epilogue please, although there seems to be so much more to this story that can be told, each and every character you have given us is amazing and comes with a story that can be built around them it seems yes? I am not ready for this awesomeness to end, certainly not David and Jacob, but all good things must come to and end, except this one... more please!!!
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September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Jacob couldn’t save Arturo, but here was a man, a blood relative that he could save. I can't believe you did that to Arturo! Shame on you! I am sorry I ever read this story or reviewed it. So, Arturo is dead, or what? This was horrible and what about Levi are you going to knock him off too! By the way, you had no warnings of this kind of rape in your tags either. I didn't enjoy this last chapter, not at all!