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I had a great time at the shower, thanks!

What an appropriate title for this chapter and hey Uncle Terry paybacks a bitch, isn't it?

I like this Navy Seal, Thompson, and wonder is he going to be Arturo's future love interest? If he is, he will definitely have his hands full, LOL.

I hope things go smoothly for Jacob when Mason and Lavinia arrive with David.

I think you made the right decision about the way you wrote Uncle Terry's torture scene. I like the way you left it and now we can picture in our minds what Salvatore and Brenner probably did to him as justice for Mason, good job! Arturo and Jacob act just like siblings and you would think they grew up together. I kind of am wondering is there a reason you had Jacob push Arturo into the arms of this new security guy? Poor Jacob is so stressed out now that he knows Mason and David's mom is coming to stay with them too, I hope he doesn't totally crack.

= w= I love these Jacob and Arturo moments =w =b hahaha

Great Chapter and I can see some serious love connections happening between 4 people can't wait. I also can't wait to meet the grandfather, hope he's coming up soon. I feel like he's going to like Jacob. The only people who have a problem with him is Malcolm and Emmanuel. Update quickly, I ready for Jacob and Mason to meet. lol

Great chapter! I am so glad that Terry is paying for molesting Mason for all those years. I simply love Arturo and Jacob. Oh, does David have a secret fetish that we should know about, LOL. I know he bought those for Jacob, at least I think he did and they are not for him..... that would be way too weird, haha. Oh, do Brenner and Thompson know each other since they were both in the military?

Damn but I think I might just be in love with Brenner. In no time at all, you gave a succinct description of both his character and motives. Oh, and you keep making Salvator more and more enjoyable. I'm left with the satisfied knowledge that Uncle Terry has been left in very capable hands. Lets just hope that furnace is still operational. Thanks again for the beautifully written chapter.

I agree with your reviewer, lunamist, and am finding myself falling in love with Brenner too for all the same reasons. Terrific chapter and fitting end to a child molester. I laugh all the time at Jacob and Arturo's antics. I missed Levi this chapter.

Can't wait to see how Mason is now that everyone is their to help him heal. I hope he makes a fully recovery emotionally and physically.

Arturo and Mason!!! I would like to see them together. Also, your work is really cool. One off my top favs <3

OMG What an emotional roller coaster! Sort of wonder if Mason will end up with Brenner (esp after what Brenner said... Brenner also strikes me as a bit of a house-husband) :D
Did Emanual never marry? He shows some redeeming qualities in this chapter (especially in light of the fact Mason's own father couldn't be bothered to come to the hospital!)
And Jacob has links with the Triad?!! That deserves multiple exclamation marks!! Didn't see that coming... wonder if this will play a part in future chapters (or perhaps David could avoid problems by never going to China with Jacob?) Also interested to hear that Juan loved Malcom (well the guy must have some redeeming qualities too, just like Emanual!)
Many Many thanks for the quick update after such a cliffy! :D I'm not too good with gore, so might have to skim over some of the next chapter by the sound of it ^0^