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God, I love Arturo!!! The scene with Jacob and Mason was so touching. I'm glad they can work on their relationship......at least until something else hits the fan! LOL and I love the way Lavania handles Emmanuel, he is so whipped.

I am glad that Masons mother, uncle terrys sister, is supporting Mason rather than blaming him. Also glad that Terry is getting at least a small bit of the punishment in the 24 hours before they kill him.

Great chapter! I wonder how similar Uncle Terry and Mason look (will this bother Brenner?). Also wonder about poss romance b/t Arturo and security head...
Thanks for being discreet with the torture scene :D !
Lotsa Luv =)

I was just wondering why Mason was such an ass to both Levi and Jacob like mentioned in first chapter. To give him the benefit of the doubt, we know now that he was sexually abused by their Uncle Terry protecting Jacob and Levi. It seems to me that he must have kept what happened locked away in the deep recess of his mind like in a closet or in a box and it was brought to the forefront by Brenner finding those tapes. Anyway, I was just curious because he seemed like a strong person in the beginning but not now. I know he's been through a horrible ordeal but couldn't he have been nicer to them? I just wanted to ask about it. Oh, I am glad you fixed your disclaimer too.

Well, dah, forget that part about the disclaimer please. That's for another story I am following, slaps myself, I read to many of them and forget what I am reviewing sometimes.

I love this story and wait for it every week. Your style is so smooth and your pacing is just right. I love all your stories!

I'm excited to see who Mason ends up with. I'm sensing Brenner and approve of that match. I also really love Arturo and his brassy personality and was hoping that you'd let him find someone too.

Can't wait for more!

love it

OMG!! I love this story!! Please marry me I love you so much for writing this!! I literally can't explain in words how much I love Arturo. Laughed my ass off when he said "Lies! I'm drop dead gorgeous and you know it. I'm everybody's type." Funniest shit ever.

I think you had the torture scene just right ! No need to be too graphic, the imagination does the rest...
I just though David wanted to participate. ^^'
The boys are very funny ! Made me laugh ! :)
I like it when Jacob has the last word...
Thanks again for the fast update.

Alright, I've decided that I want Mason with Brenner now because I think Arturo and Mason are too close in age so he needs an older man like Lansing Thompson, oh yeah that sounds nice, Arturo and Lansing sitting in a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G, lol. Uncle Terry is getting what he deserves and I am glad it's Salvatore not David dealing with it. I am glad you left out all the blood and gore and decided to leave it to our imagination instead. Oh, and it's funny, I was picturing Mason as someone who was more like David and he's not at all like I picture him to be.