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for Jacob and the Snake Charmer

by E.J

person cheesekun
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Loved Levinia (she was awesome)! And just when I was starting to think Emanual might come around eventually... Can't wait for more! Thanks for posting:D (More Salvatore Levi, pretty please =-) )
person miles
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Of course the triad has to come up ! They can't stay happy like that ! ;)
Thanks for the fast update ^^
person wolfluv
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OH What the HELL!!!! LOVED the LOVE FEST with the boys!!!! GOT TO GIVE IT TO MOM THOUGH!!!!!! E what a real snake in the grass I really hope he get his come up-ins!!!! read ya laters!!! OH and thank you for the good cry I needed it!
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh Emanuel is such a douch! Wonder what Jacob's other kin want him for? Nothing good I bet.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just gotta luv Lavinia but don't understand why she loves Emanuel so much. I am worried now about the Triad and what they want with Jacob! Update soon.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, just when everything is good now between the brothers the Triad is going to cause trouble for David and Jacob. I wonder what Lavinia will think of Emanuel knowing he got a warning and didn't stop whatever is coming their way.
person reader1962
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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person dazedandconfused
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I wish Lavinia would leave Emanuel but she really loves him so don't think it will happen. I enjoyed the story about how Mason and Levi had tried to get David to slip on the banana. It was very cute. Who called Emanuel with news about the Triad and will David find out in time to keep Jacob safe? Awesome chapter!
person iriskzk1
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lavania is nothing to play with and Emmanuel is going to get it when she finds out about him not doing anything about the Triad. I could punch him in his face!!! He could at least warn them or something. I can't wait unitl their Grandfather gets there, I hope he knocks Emmanuel down a peg because he thinks he's so high and might and he word is law.
person melanie
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I am really enjoying reading your story. Keep up the good work.