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July 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Off to a tremendous start, can tell I am going to love this story already.
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July 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Malcolm is certainly a very complex character and must be very difficult to write about. I want to get into his brain to dissect it, LOL. I can't wait to meet David's Abuela, Mama Lusmila, and bet she will fall in love with Jacob too. I think Salvatore wants to get kinky with Levi over the phone, yummy.
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July 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is just too good, update PLEASEEEEE.
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July 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
super chapters love it, i hope to like Bittersweet, i think that i will do,more please i love your style, aaa if you want to read something good http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2905382/1/One-Moment
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July 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
And so...I started a new whirlwind of ideas for you..! Hahahaha..! I wonder how old Jacob's uncle is....forties..? Does Jacob have a cousin? A beautiful, English-cultured, I-studied-in-Oxford, cousin that is still discreetly involved in the Triad? LOL
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July 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I love the fact that all the women in the familys hold all the men by their short hairs so to speak! I love the mole that got the info on E's doings and how him doing nothing is going to BITE him in the ASS!!! I still have a feeling that Fu is going to see or disrupt J's life because E will think of a way to steal J again but who knows! Anywho well done as always! read ya laters!!!
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July 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Malcolm sure is hard to read, I bet his past will play a role in the future.
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July 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
~~ scratches head ~~ blushes ~~~
Can I devour David, pretty please?
What a yummy chapter! My own toes were curling while I was reading this and I had stars in my eyes. Did I just have my own orgasm? You do realize you are corrupting my innocent self, don't you?
What does Malcolm want? Hasn't he caused enough trouble?
Can I devour David, pretty please?
What a yummy chapter! My own toes were curling while I was reading this and I had stars in my eyes. Did I just have my own orgasm? You do realize you are corrupting my innocent self, don't you?
What does Malcolm want? Hasn't he caused enough trouble?
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July 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It feels like the calm before the storm, if you know what I mean, and that David and Jacob's perfect life together is going to be disrupted very soon. ~ shivers ~ I hope Malcolm's visit isn't the catalyst for what's coming to break their happiness. I hope I am wrong. Will wait to find out! I hope I am.
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July 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
HUBA HUBA HUBA HEE HEE HEE DAMNNNN!!!! IT'S JUST SO SMEXY!!!! I hope that dear ole dad at least lets David in on the Triad thing if nothing else I'm pretty sure he's there just to suck up and I think J is owed his money back from E and I hope Good Ole GRAND DAD MAKES HIM PAY THROUGH THE NOSE!!! read ya laters damn that snake in the grass I hope it BITES HIM IN THE ASS!!!