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for Jacob and the Snake Charmer

by E.J

person awesomesauce
schedule August 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You made my day....I was jumping for joy when I saw you updated this fabulous story.
person ryla
schedule August 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
For someone who supposedly love her sons and is a good mother, Lavinia sure is clueless about their lives. She comes out as more self-absorbed and who pays more attention to her lovelife. Emmanuel beat up Jacob and she expects David to welcome him to his home. She's a damned enabler and I wish she was out of their lives. Unless she's a plot device who will end us being used by Emmanuel against her own sons ~ which she had been all their lives. That's how I see her and you can just disregard this.

I really like your boys though.
person Error
schedule August 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
omg, I love Arturo ahahaha he cracks me up everytime ahahah
I know it might be weird saying this but.....please dun pair him up with anyone LOL he's too awesome haha
But then again if you do, he'll just be as awesome.
schedule August 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see Mason is getting better.
person Pagan
schedule August 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! Sorry I haven't reviewed for a few chapters, but I'm still here and still enjoying the story. Just thought I'd tell you when I started reading and you first switched for David and Jacob to Levi and Salvatore, I thought,"NOOOOO! I want more of David and Jacob!". I kept reading, and when you switched back I thought,"NOOO! I want more of Levi and Salvatore!". Keep up the good work, now I'm happy to see anything about any of them.
person reader1962
schedule July 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
:)
person Anon
schedule July 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
R u still on vacation and that's why you are not updating as fast as you used too?
person Thegal
schedule July 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You have a fabulous way with words. Over and over throughout this story I have been awed by the way you express emotions and scenes that draw us right in. This is my favorite story from you and I hope you will give us more of the same. Waiting eagerly for the next chappie.
person dazedandconfused
schedule July 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Malcolm sure does confuse me and I am glad David understands how his mind works. The nerve of him trying to get David to sign over Jacob's trust fund back to him but it didn't work thanks to David being so smart. I am very relieved now that David knows about Jacob's uncle. I need me some more Salvatore and Levi loving. I hope they have phone sex!!!!!!
person miles
schedule July 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Malcom is a mystery and his past much more... I hope we're going to know at the end ?!
David is Jacob's white knight :) This Bittersweet doesn't understand yet but he will when he'll meet David. lol
Until next chapter...