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for Jacob and the Snake Charmer

by E.J

person Onyx
schedule August 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
One of the best stories we have going on...the loads of hits and reviews are well deserved! Can we hope for a sequel? The triad and Jacob can be definitely a wonderful storyline and provide the angst that captivates us even more.
person wolfluv
schedule August 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wowzers another great chapter and CIFFLY!!! GOSH darn it! now we'll have to wait and see! anywho MISSED YA! read ya laters!
schedule August 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. My heart goes out to Mason.
person iriskzk1
schedule August 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm back!!!! Lightening struck and knocked out the internet, phone, and television's so I've been missing in action for awhile. Glad to be back and super excited to see that Granddaddy is finally coming. Also excited to find out about bittersweet and what happened while Jacob was with him. Great chapters by the way.
person reader1962
schedule August 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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person dazedandconfused
schedule August 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
E.J.'s BACK!!!!!!!!! I was worried about you!

OMG, Salvatore and Levi's phone sex was freaking steamy HOT, HOT, HOT!!!!!! I just hope nobody but Salvatore sees the nude pictures he sent over the phone, it would be embarrassing say that if Malcolm somehow got a hold of them.

Arturo and Jacob going to the same community college should prove interesting, LOL.

I hope Brenner can help Mason to open up and am very happy for Mason that he admitted he doesn't want to study for the bar but instead wants to study fine arts, awesome! I am glad David is going to help him achieve that goal.
person wolfluv
schedule August 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love how this whole family is coming together! Their Mom kills me! She makes me laugh in such a good way! I hope that she truly gets her eyes open to what Emanuel does to the kids for real! I'm just worried the Triad's are going to steal J and the brothers are all going to go ape shit on everyone... Although I can't wait for E to get his come uppins!!!! Hee heee Mawha ha ha haaaaa!!! read ya laters!
person miles
schedule August 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You like to tease your reader ! ;)
I can't wait for a real scene between Levi and Salvator...
person cheesekun
schedule August 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
My gosh! So many things are gonna happen -the triad, Bittersweet, Malcom's lost twin brother and mysterious past... I really hope Bittersweet wasn't responsible in some way for what happened to Jacob! And curious as to what became of Malcom's lost twin... Looking forward to next chapter;)
person cheesekun
schedule August 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter! Phone sex was hot ;) Can't wait for Brenner to meet Mason! And for Bittersweet to finally make his appearance!