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Oh boy, next chapter we find out the whole story. Can't wait!

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Hey I was hit by a car twice myself! I'm in a wheelchair the first time was in a manuel chair trying to go to work the day after Thanks Giving a 19yro trying to get the car back to Mom so she could go to work didn't clear off her windshield very well and hit me... I had the ambulance guys laughing though... My wheel chair was 20 feet from me and they didn't see it they found me under the bus I just got off of and I don't know if you've ever seen the movie Silver Bullet but the kid's in a wheelchair as well anywho at the end of the movie after all is said and done the kids sister asks him if he's okay and says NO... I can't feel my legs... WELL needless to say when I'm upset or can't stand to have people freaking out I crack jokes and The ambulance guy was like are you hurt anywhere?? And my first response was hey... I can't feel my legs... His eyes got to saucers and I said do you know what would help me the most.... He said no what can I do I said can you get me my wheelchair I think it flew off in that direction hee hee sorry but it you really met me you would totally understand! Second time I was on a crosswalk in and eletric wheelchair and she was 22 on her way to her boyfriends house and told the cops I didn't stop until I heard a loud bang which was ME... She had no drivers license not even her car it was her sisters. Needless to say there's a running bet on when the next time will be.. Enough about me Loved this chapter and YES GOSH DARN IT YOU LEFT ANOTHER CLIFFY!!!! I'm guessing the silent partner was GRANPA? Yeah YEAH I know what a longshot but you did say J doesn't remember and you said we'd be surprized! ANYWHO read ya laters!

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Great chapter! I really felt for Mason, poor baby. Can't wait for the next chapter and to finally meet Bittersweet!
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I keep trying to leave reviews and AFF eats them every time, it's so frustrating!

Brenner reminds me of Superman and there are at least two songs from the series Smallville that fit him; it's not easy to be me and I am more than a bird, more than a plane.

He's Mason's superman!

Poor Mason !
Can't wait for the next chapter ! And 'Bittersweet' ! :)

Oh boy, I think Emanuel is in deep doggy doo, oh yeah! Thank gosh David is so smart! I am looking forward to the meeting. I hope you get back on tract with updating soon, I miss your super fast updates and get afraid you will disappear from here and story will never be finished. I just panic because that happens a lot around here and will be happy with weekly updates as long as you promise not to abandon us.

Well, I for one think like ryla, I can't stand Lavinia the she-bitch.
The fact that she was pressured to wed Malcolm, even though they loathe each other, and because of that she deliberatly ignore he sons.
I love to bits your fic, but I'm not sorry for blasting her !!!! she reminds me too much of one of my friend's mother, well she wasn't really a mother, too concerned to go to cocktails and champagne, at the swimming-pool with other super bitchy friends, and never really around my friend... what a piece of work!!!

Lavinia is for me a near-total failure as a mother, I mean where the he** was she when Mason began to have strange behaviours around her brother ? where was she when Levi began his downward spiral with drugs and gambling ? oh that's right she was too busy going out to various charities, or sleeping around with various men and Emmanuel...
The only son that all along she loves is David, because he is the son of her love.
She tries to redeem herself when she was confronted with Mason's suicide, and I agree that being a Mom is not always easy, and also a lot of previous factors had a negative impact toward Lavinia, like she didn't receive herself a lot of love by her parents, a life of riches but lonely and hollow...

Anyway, please update very soon, I love your story and want to know what will befall to our boys !!!!