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Aaand...I was wondering when the Triad would start to mobilize...lol...and isn't his name supposed to be two words? Like Cheng Lei? As per example of Xiao Lan and such..?

Seriously, only five more chapters to go?!! What the heck! How are you going to give us closure that quick?!Nooooooooo!!!!!!! Oh, and it's not you who should thank us for reviewing but us who should say "thank you" for writing and sharing this story on your own time. Hey, if you slacked off, we would just bitch slap you to get you motivated again! I hope you are already working on a new story to entertain us filled with intriguing and hot male specimens.

I wonder if Malcolm and Emanuel are shitting their pants over the Triad taking a hit out on them. I assume they know. I am still curious as to who Bittersweet's silent partner is but it looks like someone David should know , but who? I hope Bittersweet comes and see Jacob soon.

I want more of my Levi and Salvatore. I want to see what's going on with Mason and Brenner! I want more of this, damn it, more please.

It can't be the end coming..................

No, E.J., this story can't almost be over! I am going to cry.

I hope Jacob and David get to make love for the first time before the Triad strikes! It's just their luck that they will get interrupted right at that special moment.

Please let there be happy endings for everyone and don't let them get hurt!

Oh, and you've just gotta write more stories this good!

LOL Oh yeah, it's about that time. I can't wait to see Emmanuel's face when he hears that there has been a hit put out on him. Bet he's going to wish that he did something now.

Ooops, poor Emanuel, nope.

Ooops, poor Malcolm, absolutely not.

I love Bittersweet and think he should attempt to at least call Jacob.

I am confused as to who his silent partner is.

David and Jacob rule my universe.

:) !

I've been waiting for this part in the story. I thought it was bittersweet but now I feel like it someone David knows. I have a feeling the s**t is about to hit the fan. Also I hope we get to see who's going to be with Thompson...I think that's his name.......I'm too lazy to go check.

Absolutely fascinated by Bittersweet! No idea who this silent partner could be (Brenner maybe? He seems to have fairly strong morals for a hit man and information monger...) Can't wait to be surprised! ;)

Bittersweet is very mysterious and I can't wait to find out more about him and what happened to Jacob.

No, no, no !! Not another cliff ! 'pout'
I just want to know about Jacob's master ! Sooo, you have to update very soon, please... :)