rate_review Reviews

Love, love, loved this story!!!!!!!!

This is my second read of this story I loved, and I still enjoyed it tremendously if not more as I read it a bit slower the second time around to get at everything I missed my first read. I am looking forward so much to the sequel, thank you for doing that.

I read your story till the end but I have to say that it wasnt my cup of tea.your characters changed too quickly.i cant believe them.and the last chapter was the worst with what happened to Arthuro.but thank you anyway for sharing your story with us.

If you ever write a sequel and don't post the story here on AFF, please let us know where we can find it to read by leaving a note on your author profile page.

This journal entry epilogue was incredibly well-written. When you can write a gem like that, you can write anything and pull us in. I thoroughly enjoyed this fabulous story, will always remember this story as one of my absolute favorites and cannot wait for whatever you wish to write from now on. I am a fan. Thank you.

That was so beautifully written, the last chapter just about brought tears to my eyes. I feel so sad for Arturo, I wish he can work through his sadness and find love and peace too. I am over the moon for Jacob and David, their love is simply heart-warming and I hope it will continue in the sequel (this story is just too too awesome not to have a sequel). You are most definitely one of my favorite author and this has to be one of my favorite story hands down!!

.................what have you done D: ARTURO D:

Absolutely loved the entire story, and I know Jacob and David are the main focus, but I really came to enjoy Levi and Salvatore's story the most and I was REALLY hoping you'd do more with them, especially after Levi got shot and after he healed.

But the whole thing is awesome. There's so many questions. Like who is Nicholas really, and what exactly has he been doing since he dropped off the face of the Earth. And what was Nicholas and Malcom's plan? What is Bittersweet's place in everything?

There's a /ton/ of unanswered questions, and I loved all of it. And I REALLY hope there's plans for a sequel, maybe?

And sorry if this is just a whole bunch of "I wants". The entire story was GREAT. I started reading it around halfway through your posting of it, so around chapter 13-18 or so, but around the time I was getting really into Mafia/Cartel related stories anyway and it's awesome.

Thanks so much for sharing it with us~

Arturo screams sequel! I mean come on, he's one BIG unresolved matter...like what happened in all those months? Or how will he recover?...I wanna know duhhh

Otherwise nice story, even if, like I said before, I kinda hoped for a more badass David character.

You say there will be a sequel right? You did say that right? Oh my you just made my day.....now I don't have to go into Jacob and David and their whole fabulous family withdrawal!! Please don't keep us waiting too long you wonderful author you, hugs!!!