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Just thought i should make a note that although i love your stories and have just finished chapter twelve so it may change through you work, but the Naga are in almost all legends and are shown unequivocally to be the good guys and the garuda who i think you based your bird fellows on are shown as the evil ones this is true as far east as you can go as far west as you can go as far north and south as you can go and interestingly NAGA is found in practically every language on earth to mean the same thing. keep writing, if you want to chat here is my email HAPPY_HAMPSTERS@HOTMAIL.COM

pacu have dull teeth. not sharp. like molars kinda. =3 chewers not tearers.

Lol, ever been bit by a human or a fish with 'dull' teeth, ruire? They do not have the ripping jagged teeth, but they're still sharp. I'll admit the 'yes, sort of' on Bashta's part wasn't fully accurate when asked if the had teeth like a pirahna but from an newb's standpoint... the other jaguar could still lose some flesh if he wasn't careful while they were fishing. Getting those hooks out by hand would be real fun. I hope you're enjoying the story despite the whole sharp/dull thing.

Loved the first story, now this one as well, well done! Hope you write more, your stories are good.

I have been a fan of your writing ever since I read your first story. I love this one just as much...please don't stop updating!

Great chapter. Thanksss xoxo

great chapter, looking forward to next update!

love it

Yay! Part two's start looks promising :)

Oh I love this story. Another great treat for readers!