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August 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is very intriguing. I look forward to more...
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July 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! Brother-in-law? Like Alma's husband? I didn't think she was married. And speaking of Alma, why does Rene (shit, I don't remember if it's Rene or Renee, sorry), lie about her? Why wouldn't he tell people what happened to her?
I think Andrea is very nice, although I agree w/Rene; he is old enough to be his father. lol A bit too old.
Great chapter! Can't wait for more! :)
I think Andrea is very nice, although I agree w/Rene; he is old enough to be his father. lol A bit too old.
Great chapter! Can't wait for more! :)
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June 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Why is Rene hiding his sisters death from some people? I would have thought everyone knew she was dead.
I like this story and can't wait to read more
I like this story and can't wait to read more
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June 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! What happened to Rene? It sounds like he was drugged or something but I can't remember him drinking or eating anything. Unless it was just Jack's hot fucks that drugged him out. lol
If I were Dr. Gallagher, I'd be too embarrassed to show my face at the bakery. At least he acknowledged that it was unprofessional and it couldn't happen again.
It was sweet of Dr. Winters to get Rene a plant as a thank you. I wonder if there was anything in the plant that could have harmed Rene. He did sniff it, after all.
Great chapter! I'm looking forward to the next one! =)
If I were Dr. Gallagher, I'd be too embarrassed to show my face at the bakery. At least he acknowledged that it was unprofessional and it couldn't happen again.
It was sweet of Dr. Winters to get Rene a plant as a thank you. I wonder if there was anything in the plant that could have harmed Rene. He did sniff it, after all.
Great chapter! I'm looking forward to the next one! =)
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June 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading your story and I'm hooked! It's terrific! :)
Rene does seem mature for a twenty-one year old. Maybe he had to grow up a bit when his parents died (even though he wasn't living with them or even in the same city), and then when his sister died. How did she die? How old was she?
I did have a question: if Amy is in high school, why was she in the bakery all day? And why were there no other employees? Wouldn't a bakery normally have a few bakers? How did they get all the croissants and Chocolate German cake made? lol Oh, and why on earth did Rene send Amy down the street to get breakfast, when THEY WORK IN A BAKERY???? lol I was actually laughing at that. :)
I know I'm being picky, sorry.
I do love the story and now I'm going to read chapter two. =)
Rene does seem mature for a twenty-one year old. Maybe he had to grow up a bit when his parents died (even though he wasn't living with them or even in the same city), and then when his sister died. How did she die? How old was she?
I did have a question: if Amy is in high school, why was she in the bakery all day? And why were there no other employees? Wouldn't a bakery normally have a few bakers? How did they get all the croissants and Chocolate German cake made? lol Oh, and why on earth did Rene send Amy down the street to get breakfast, when THEY WORK IN A BAKERY???? lol I was actually laughing at that. :)
I know I'm being picky, sorry.
I do love the story and now I'm going to read chapter two. =)
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June 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What a professional shrink! lol I like the way he "cures" his patients, well, Rene at least. ;)
Yes, I also believe Rene is a nympho. I certainly don't think that's just a 'woman's thing' as Dr. Gallagher put it.
I don't like the fact that Rene lied about his sister. I know that he didn't go there for therapy, but to be 'closer' to his crush, but if he's there he may as well try the therapy. But lying isn't going to solve anything. Did he lie b/c it's too painful for him to think about, never mind talking about? It must be harder to talk about his sister than his parents.
Well, now I finished your latest update and I need MORE!!!! lol
Yes, I also believe Rene is a nympho. I certainly don't think that's just a 'woman's thing' as Dr. Gallagher put it.
I don't like the fact that Rene lied about his sister. I know that he didn't go there for therapy, but to be 'closer' to his crush, but if he's there he may as well try the therapy. But lying isn't going to solve anything. Did he lie b/c it's too painful for him to think about, never mind talking about? It must be harder to talk about his sister than his parents.
Well, now I finished your latest update and I need MORE!!!! lol
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June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really have fallen in love with this story!! And that says a lot since I rarely review stories!! Please update.