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David and Valaire belongs together. How fast he wants to spill Alexi's secret , a great priest, with so a help, the best had he remained in the church.

Very interesting and exciting story. I so hope Davíd will not tell the story and it's all just a bluff or something.
Poor Alexi. He should definitely get his revenge.

Thank you for Update. Finaly Alexis will be able to get even with Valaire. I am happy that he could go away from them. I don't like David so much, because how can you understand so what Alexis suffered and then to say so shalow words, the best ist you don't say anything. Valaire should not die, but turn a slave to David and the Church, so he can hear so a Sermon every day. That is a evil punishment, ha ha !!!! I wish Alexis will find a strong mann to help him to revenge and maybe to fall in love, but not so a priest. I am for the revenge , let the Showdown beginns.

I love this story wish it was longer but I really enjoy reading it over and over please update soon :)

Finally, a spot of hope. Congratulations, Valaire didn't just cross the Moral Event horizon, he nosedived into it. You've created a character so loathsome I can't wait to see him dead. That's a compliment, by the way. Every story needs a loathsome villain. Please, do keep writing.

So sad, but I can understand that Alexis did Not want his son to suffer. After so a Loss, he should no matter what do not betray his secret. Valeris should too suffer for this. Unexpected he should fall in Love with Alexis and know that Alexis would never forgive him. That is the best punishment. I will be waiting for more, thanks.

I hate Valaire so much, he must suffer, please give Alexis soon a Chance to revenge, or to go away, he really does not deserves this.

I like your story but it's kind of hard to read because he jumbled all together. Please could you fix the spacing so it's easier to read? Thank you!