rate_review Reviews

Oh. My. God. That. Was. Fucking. AMAZING! Goddamn that was soooooo not expected! I love how you ALWAYS surprise the hell out of me. You really are an amazing writer. I can't believe the new step daddy raped him!!! The mom needs a serious slap to the side of her head to make her snap out of it and see the fucking light!!! As soon as I saw that the step dad was walking into the room where M was by himself I was screaming in my head OH NO!!! This poor beautiful man cannot take much more...And theeeeeeen when I saw it was D that he was going to be forcing the dick on I was like OH HOLY HEEELL NAAAW! (Even though I would have loved to read about that if it did happen) And I'm NOT saying D doesn't deserve it...it's just that I thought the situation was going to go in a totally different way...and trust me...the way you had it go down?--HANDS DOWN--the most perfect way ANYONE could have POSSIBLY had it go down so far. I love love love your talent and it's ability to ALWAYS keep me on the edge of my seat with every single update. Annnd speaking of updates😉 I am--ABSOLUTELY--looking forward to the next one. I'm sure you are a VERY busy person sooooo I'm forcing myself to be patient...but it's hard...ITS REALLY FUCKING HARD...so I will just have to try a little harder to be MORE patient❤️

WOW I almost feel sorry for Delmar... I'm happy Masha is getting more of back bone and I almost hope they run in to Vhet and maybe Delmar will learn from him and maybe Masha will learn some true magic... read ya latersQ

Oh my goodness!!!! I'm so nervous...there is no way this "protection" is going to last! Im so scared this new husband is going to hurt my poor M. And what the hell is wrong with the mom? This woman needs smacked back into reality! It is all a very nice twist but I still hope Vhet comes back to claim M as his! I'm also worried years of abuse will change my poor M's whole demeanor...and I want him to be sweet and beautiful but how can that last? They have probably beat it out of him! Thank you for the Valentines Day update! Can't wait for the next chapter❤️

I really do hope that Vhet comes back to take Maesha home with him!

I really don't like the fact that Maesha has been left with Delmir. I think that Delmir lived too long under his father's dictatorial thumb and he hasn't really grown up to become the man of the house. Poor Maesha just gets treated like a toy by Delmir. Now it looks like that Gouran is going to try to molest Maesha. Nothing seems to really get better for Maesha.

I've really enjoyed your story so far, thank you!

OH MY GOODNESS! This is not going to end well for someone.... read ya laters! OH and happy V to you too!

I'm reviewing just to say that I liked it and can't wait for more :D
Good job

Oh my god!!!! Where to begin?!? I fucking love this story...I want to protect and love this poor poor man who so desperately needs it. I love Vhet but I wish he would knock the hell out of the soon to be "man" of the house. He is such a cowardly punkass and he wouldn't know love if it bit him in the ass. And I can't say I would be upset if something bad happened to his bitchass momma:) I can't wait to read more and I'm very happy you have finished it and will be updating regularly now but it also makes me sad because I don't want it to end❤️ Thank you again for sharing your amazing talent!

I know happy endings don't always have to happen but... Well if there was a vote I would swing towards happy. I'm glad Masha has finally opened up his mouth and told everyone straight out what's he's really thinking and I'm glad everyone's smartening the Fuck Up, but I'm with him when he said to Vhet you're no better so what's the difference. OH and hey it's better late then never when you post, life happens. read ya laters!

This chap seems a little rushed, but still happy you updated so soon!
Will be interested to see how this ends...and any chance of continuing Aten?

Hi! Really love your story so far. Hope that Maesha and Vhet end up together. Delmir still has growing up to do. He just seemed to treat Maesha more like a toy than a person. It's great that you have finished your story now. Looking forward to more stories in the future!