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for Omega Testing

by Shinashi

person Hello
schedule May 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love how the story is progressing. Your writing style is great. :) Can't wait for more.
person poppyhigh
schedule May 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh...I'm falling in love with Yves. He just really good to follow what gonna happen to him more with both Master. Hope to readmore soon...Supporting you ≧﹏≦
schedule May 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Two years lost?! My heart hurts for you!
I'm so glad to have clicked on this little number, it's hot and oh so perfect! Wonderful work.

XoXo
person carrion
schedule May 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I've waited for this story to continue for so long! I'm glad you are back with it. Keep up the great work! (*´∀`*)
person Nbsiren
schedule May 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back^^
person Lilly
schedule July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A really amazing story already, even though it only got 2 chapters.
I hope you continue and update soon. And please don't abandon this fic;
I really hate it when my favourite stories are abandoned.
person Anon
schedule June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really love your stories and this one is one of my favorites, but I just have to point out ONE thing that really distracts me from your otherwise awesome writing. You oftentimes switch tenses mid-story (or mid-chapter) and I find it very distracting to the text. It'll go from, "I said and did this" to "I say and do this". But otherwise I totally love your works and this last chapter was steamy with a hiss!
person nea
schedule June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am so enjoying this story! I do have some problems reading a few of Brandon's words, which it really funny since I live in Louisiana. lol But it's one thing to hear people speak that way, and another to actually try to read it. Can't wait to see where this story goes, especially what's gonna happen with Samuel and Yves. Looking forward to more. Thanks for the good read!
person Poohkie87
schedule June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ok its a great story.
person Obsessive much?
schedule June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Amazing!!! New favorite story!